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The Naughty Mouse

When Mickey Mouse came in
He committed a terrible sin
With Minnie he spent his life
He never made her his wife

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Clerihew Style

A Clerihew is a comic verse consisting of two couplets and a specific rhyming scheme, usually aabb. The poem is about/deals with a person/character within the first rhyme.

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  • DesolatELifE
    June 19
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    In truth; I wouldn't marry her either =[


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    l.o.l.

    love this! very cute! yeah Amera I see how terribly u wrote this!! terribly well!


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    Oh shame on you Mickey!!!



    I LOVE this form and the poem was really cute!

  • jadeangyal
    September 17, 2008
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    Very clever! Hahaha.


  • Nangaleema
    March 10, 2008

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    Nifty! I like to visit your page and randomly sample your poems because I always learn about forms I've never heard of. Always a pleasure! - NANGALEEMA


  • acari27 gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    I liked this too, it had a famous subject, was whimsical, thanks for the effort

  • NeferMaatNetjer silver member
    December 7, 2007

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    yeah, you're right. those sinful little mice. but then, Walt never made a preacher or a judge character, so I wonder if that could be why. hmmm.

  • Billbard silver member
    September 11, 2007

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    Thank you muchly for your well crafted entry in the Humorous Quatrain contest.I hope you enjoyed writing itas much as did readin it.Good luck


  • Griswold gold member
    September 11, 2007

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    LOL, you even have a form for humorous rhyming quatrains?
    You are too much Amera. Best of luck...Scott


  • grannyeri gold member
    June 7, 2007

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    First time I have read one of these forms of poetry. Certainly thought this one was right one - a bit on the humorous side and easy to read and understand. Might have to try this one some time.


  • And Hyetal
    June 4, 2007

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    This is great! Really funny. Clerihews look like fun, and look really easy, too!

    Always,
    Cassie


  • MysticAngelEyes
    March 26, 2007

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    That was so veryy funny lol and so very cute and if you think about it so true. Very well done and so very creative.


  • LoveFairyLexy
    March 24, 2007

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    Real Funny.

    I'm going to try a clerihew
    I am new so it may take time
    Be patient please
    thank you
    love
    lexy


  • Never Fall in Love
    February 23, 2007

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    hmmm...
    first .. i was thinking
    what the hell is a clerihew..
    and its this easy?
    ok ok .. maybe not easy
    but its really simple
    i wonder (lol, yes, again)
    why such a difficult word for this?

    I havent seen much of mickey mouse
    but i do notice
    he never married her
    tsk tsk ..
    bad mickey

    NeveR ♥


  • seasonsoflove
    February 2, 2007
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    ya... i never thought of that!


  • ButterflyKisses95
    December 24, 2006

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    OoOo

    OOOO very creative very very creative and sorta true for i have never heard they got married very nice write

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