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the
magic
holiday
winter fun,
of Christmas,
has just begun.
children, presents
and Christmas cheer
mother and father and
grandma dear. turkey and
dressing; dinner fit for a king
paper angels tied up with string
family fun and Christmas past; all
these things make our memories last.
so merry Christmas to you and a happy
new year; may your loved ones be blessed
and those
you hold dear.
Author notes
Shape Style. A Concrete poem
In a list
A contest entry
- *~*~ Shape of Rythm ~*~* by Melissa Burns.
500 points, ended December 11, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shape Poems In The Form Of Christmas Trees by Crystal Chanda Lear.
550 points, ended December 20, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wonderful poem good luck
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A perfect picture you have painted not only in form
but in warmth and comforting thoughts...
"so merry Christmas to you and a happy
new year; may your loved ones be blessed
and those
you hold dear."
Merry Christmas to you too, Poet!
~ Nicky♥
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First off, congratulations on winning the gold trophy with this wonderful shape poem. Your rhymes work extremely well, and the layout of your poem is very lovely indeed. I could really see this delightful poem on a Christmas card for sure. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.
David
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Awesome work here!
Well done with this piece
and thanks a lot for sharing it here!
Good luck to you in the contest and
congratulations to you on your gold
trophy! Keep it up!
Jeremy0826 -
Wow
Very good.I love your poem and i like how you presented it. I know i'm only thirteen going on fourteen but i still like your poet.
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hey amera. i just wanted to tell you that i used this poem in my card! used it on the inside cover! it was really cute! i overlayed it on a picture of a christmas tree that had presents at the bottom..it was adorable..
if you would like a copy of the card i would love to send it to you..just message me with your address and i'll have it in the mail asap
thanks,
danielle -
hello again
This is absoultly wonderful, however I did notice this time reading it, you have no capitails after your periods, other than that this is still brilliant!
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This has to be the best idea. It looks so attractive, the poem is good and it could suit family, friends, and all but very tiny children. Would be superb on the front of a card with the inside kept very simple. Very well done
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hey...
this would make a REALLY good christmas card greeting!! maybe like the front cover and then something on the inside..what do you think??? i like it and very creative!! thanks for posting in my contest and best of luck at judging!
thanks,
danielle
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This is great, it should be made into a Christmas Card.
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this is gorgeous! you did a great job. good luck in the contest.
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this is gorgious!
I love this and so write on time for the holidays , absoulty wonderful -
Lovely Thank you very much for entering my little contest - I hope you had fun entering - I am having a blast judging this one
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Exquisite ...
c'est absolument parfait. Totally perfect. You could make this into a Xmas card and send it out to everyone you know.
I did that once, with one of my Xmas poems. Afterward I found that none of them even noticed I wrote it, and none of them even kept the cards, which were rather expensive. However, that's neither here nor there. It just proved that my relatives are idiots. Needless to say, I quit sending Xmas cards to them after that.
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this poem makes me happy!
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I'm so glad you posted this in my contest!! I saw it somewhere in another contest but couldn't find it again and it has been bugging me. The style you used is awesome. Thanks again and all the best at judging. Cathy
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How festive and creative! Christmas is for sharing and caring and I am happy you cared enough to share your holiday spirit with us! (Even if it is barely November, 07) Actually, the tree is my favorite part of the X-Mas holiday. The scent of a fresh cut evergreen is heaven to my olfactory senses and so sybolic of the season. I'm glad I took a peek!
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This is such a wonderful holiday poem. How do you do this? I'm lucky to just get mine on the page at all. LOL
I wish you all the best in this contest. You really do have an awesome poem here, Cathy -
This is such a wonderful holiday poem. How do you do this? I'm lucky to just get mine on the page at all. LOL
I wish you all the best in this contest. You really do have an awesome poem here, Cathy
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This is great! I love the rhyme and the shape!! Awesome job!! Thank you so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest!!!
Leslie -
Great job!
I love the colors and the rhyme!
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Christmas time is my FAVORITE time of year! And this really expresses the beauty of the holiday season. I love your creativity! How the tree is green and everything, that's awesome! Great job.
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Well, I got bored, so I decided to read your very first poem on AP!
Okay, it's a little too early to be reading Christmas poems, but it really got me in the mood for holiday cheer! (Urm... It's around 90 degrees and I haven't even gotten my Halloween candy yet... 
Well, that just shot the mood.)
I always love reading your poems!!!!!
Always,
Cassie
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Very pretty...lovely little Christmas tree!!
Good be perfect for a hallmark card
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Looks like your poem doden't it?
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That took some time. Very well put together You could be a greeting card company.
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What a great shape to write a Christmas poem in. This one was right one and says so much about this special time of year - very nice to read and even just look at. LOL
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awww..this is very cute and enjoyable. thank you for entering.
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I like shape poetry
This is well done. Well shaped and well written, nothing feels forced.
Buddy
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Gee thanks for reading these. They are all my old stuff. This one didn't let me give you stars.
Love,
Amera
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i admire anyone who can do shape poetry. i try to write heart shaped but it always comes out deformed. thank you for sharing this with me. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you for entering my shape poetry contest!!!!!!!
Good luck with your entry.........
Tracey!!!!!!!!!
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What a great poem! Good words and sentiment, and the shape is most excellent! sj
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Simply Delightful
And oh so cheery. Just wonderful with the gold star and red color to boot. Not to mention a lovely message that just warmed the heart. Wonderful shape poetry here. Best of luck. ~Pam
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wow! thanks
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Excellent!
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Such a lovely tree, makes me miss the holidays - though I can definatly wait another year to deal with all that food! Nice flow, great form. Good luck to you in the contest!
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A very clever and well constructed piece of poetry and the xmas tree shape suits the theme perfectly. well done.
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Super cool! You should sell this to hallmark!
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ohhhhhh cooooooll!!!!!!!by the way..i think that these types of poems have a name...wait let me try to member..um...nope...never mind...i cannot member....okay...but still..this is great...BYE!!!!!!!
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Welcome to AP
Well done! Very creative and clever piece and such a nice sharing! Welcome to Ap; hope you enjoy the site!! -
Welcome to Allpoetry
Well this is absolutely a neat way to write a poem. It’s wonderful; I love the style you have used and the Christmas theme as well. I think that is very clever and unique!! Nicely done** Welcome to the site! If you have any questions or if I can be of any assistance please don't hesitate to send me or any greeter an IM. Dove
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Beautiful
The creativity of the heart the finger speaketh that is just what i can say you have done a great work with your fingers and i am wishing you same and blessed one with more inspirations
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