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Goodbye...

I remember it well.  Your touch, how you smelled.  How could I ever forget that smell?  So clean and fresh.  You took your shirt off then your pants.  You walked over and grabbed the back of my neck and leaned in.  Thats when I knew it was coming.  That feeling I had longed for.  Then  BOOM , it hit me.  You. Your lips.  Soft at first and then harder and harder.  You pushed me on the table then pulled me off and led me to the back.  You pulled me down and kissed me once more.  Your hands caressed my body.  I was all yours at that moment.  You didn't have to say anything for I could feel it all.  Like you wanted me to feel everything you were.  All the emotions flowed out of your body and into mine.  Scary at first, then that feeling of assuredness  fell upon me.  You touched me again.  Your hand moved down.  Down.  Inside you went.  You moved faster and harder.  I felt it.  It came so fast.  I wish it had been longer.  A few moments at least.  That would be a few moments longer I got to be in your presence.  Now, here I sit, outside, hours later and I can still smell you on me.  Oh how I wish that smell would never go away.  I wish I could keep it forever.  But, for now, I have to unwillingly let it go.  Goodbye...

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Just something I was feeling and decided to write it down...

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  • Myjoy gold member
    April 2, 2007
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    Grat write, it was heart felt.


  • The Misty One
    December 23, 2006

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    Amazing

    Aww, hun, it's a wonderful write! I feel what you're saying so well. Beautiful darling, beautiful! Keep up the good work.