Ode to our love:
The Warrior Poet
and the lovelustre.
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A: Aquire us a preacher and a matrimonial ring.
Bring in a choir at the wedding to sing.
B: The band shall play for us many sweet tunes.
But are banned from overshadowing our lovely I do's.
C: Come say your vows as we join at the alter.
Cum on to me later, our passions shall not falter.
D: Damn to anyone that protests our true love.
Let our desires dammed up, fly high as a dove.
E: This epoch of love on which we embark.
Is an epic tale from which we never shall part.
F: My hair upon matrimonial pillow, is fine and fair.
Our bed of love is free; I'll never charge you fare.
G: You love women that are feminine, or gays.
Now forget all of them, only to me do thee gaze.
H: That manly, hairy chest of yours seduces me.
My old lover Harry no longer intruduces me.
I: I'd give up all of my lovers just to have you.
You have eyed me, and had my lovers caged in the zoo.
J: Let's make love on our wedding night covered in jam.
Jamb your love in me, buttering you is not my only plan.
K: I'll shake, shout and scream that you are my colonel.
Bite my kernal of passion, and your tongue do a twirl.
L: We take out a lien to buy us a house.
Lean into me on our marriage bed, you, my spouse.
M: The maid will tidy up the bed, two schillings her pay.
Where we made love a plenty, til the early light of day.
N: You navel warrior are made of wonderous stuff.
The taste of my navel grinds you to dust.
O: Oh, grand lover of mine, sower of passion.
You owe me only your love, that is always in fashion.
P: Bring me a pail and milk to make cheese.
You make me pale, as I wail, and cry out yes, please!
Q: When back on love's bed, my wink is your cue.
You queue up to my charms, and say I love you.
R: We recede every night into lover's delight.
You reseed my flower bed, my flower bud of the night.
S: This scene plays erotically over and over.
Seen by the neighbors as unrestrained lovers.
T: This tale of our wedding, and love in marriage.
Is about our tails meeting, and needing a carriage.
U: Your seed meets my egg, we shall not undo.
As baby makes three, undue pleasures ensue.
V: The blood in the veins of the babe that is ours.
We are not vain to the heaven, the moon and the stars.
W: Your word was a promise to me, it is I you will love.
That word whirled into a baby, a gift from above.
Y: You're the man in this world that I most adore.
Your child a gift to me, for you I humbly bore.
Z: Alas, I found no good homophones for the letters x or z.
But this tale is about love, marriage and a baby.
A contest entry
- Make me fall in love with you ? by The Warrior Poet.
375 points, ended February 2, 2007, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A beautifully different poem. I love the form you used with the letters. Well done and deserving of the gold.
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Wow! I did this style on my own...and to get a gold for it, is quite the pleasure! Thank you!
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this is just awesome.... i have never seen these types before and it take my hat off to you..... it is just brilliant... i wishyou well in the contest
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Brilliant-
What a Wonderful tale and I have never done one of
these but they do not look easy
This Ode Brilliantly constructed~
At first I thought this was for his other contest
Thank You for sharing Your Talent~
Best wishes to You!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I did this on my own...something for fun, for love, for him, and to keep life a kick!
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at home, I have a reverse dictionary...instead of the words, and giving the meanings...it has the meanings in alphabetical order, and giving the words...it gives me great insight to rhymes...when I don't do acrostics
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i should like to see such a dictionary...so many interesting tools for the modern poet!
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awesome
an outstanding play with words and very creative...even more awesome is the dedication...this write is fantastic...smile...hugs and love, David
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This one grew out of my head and my heart.
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you did similies..or words that sound alike but are totally different...this was an awesome write...to find the words to begin with, and then to utliize
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I printed up a list of homophones from a web site. It ate up 50 pages of print, some repititious. So that part was made easy for me, pulling such words out of my head, might have taken years..haha!
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This is absolutely fantastic! Funny and very very clever.
However, one small typo ...
N: You navel warrior are made of wonderous stuff.
The taste of my navel grinds you to dust.
You naval warrior?
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Awesome
You're brilliant. I don't know if i would've been able to do this as you do!! Smile
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haha I think I like U and the ending the best. Cute one
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Thanks ea! for visiting, enjoying!
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Crap
I forgot the applause....I gave you 3 clappers ....but they are not showing up!!!!! -
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I shall pin the clappers to my heart, as AP is ignoring your plea to post them!
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Very cool ~
You are showing a side of you which I have not seen Sissy ~
You are becomming a wonderful writer....not that you weren't before...but I LOVE the way you are taking chances and penning indifference ~
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i started out expressing pent up love,
that is how i started at AP.
then contests gave me inspiration.
now i try to write with out contests to inspire.
So my boyfriend the Warrior gives me inspiration, when he is not asking me to write him a poem.
If i was single, I'd fly to England and be his mistress!
cool!
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