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eternal weeping

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to a precious rose

i'll sing with great fury

a madness imposed

not listening to jury

~

i love you

i do

i know it's hard to hear

someone else is reading this

wishing she had not tested me clear

~

does not matter

i don't envy

the one that comes near

like you, scalded brand

it burns and it sears

~

i come close to you now

kiss your soft lips and bow

will you be my wife

even under the knife

~

this could go on

but i'll end it right here

i love you, i love you, i love you so dear!

~

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  • smiley
    September 15

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    amazing

    this was a great emotional piece of love.. I truly felt you as I was reading this, you took me there to another place in time.. Great work.

    Yvonne


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 15

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    Such an indepth soul, reads with heartfelt beauty sincerely. Thanks for being such a loving heart, you'll always be near in mine. I love how you ended this, perfectly my dear brother. Much love always, your bro Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • real irish rose
    February 28

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    Feeling a little sad today, thought I would read your poems since they always stirred a reaction in one way or another... I miss you Tim, hope your still with me could do with knowing you are... julie x


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 12
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    Beautiful write here

    Your writting is so deep and with such a love embraced within .

  • meaningfull
    November 9, 2007
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    Beautifull write!! I enjoyed this so much! Love it!!!


  • StarEyes
    May 21, 2007
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    What a great read this one is!! I have read this at least 20 times, and just now decided to comment,

    I would have said "yes" in a heart beat! For many reasons, the first being, I love you more than you will ever know!

    Hold on my heart,

    Love ya

    Nettie


  • HeartTangles
    December 24, 2006

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    What a Merry Christmas

    What a wonderful exclamation of love and I love the acceptance comment below. Looks like it won't be long till we have little lions clawing about. congratulations to both of you

  • eyesofgreen
    December 23, 2006

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    sweet and direct. tell us if she says yes. it's great to be called precious especially if it's so heartfelt.


  • Closet Poet
    December 23, 2006
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    that was really nice


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 23, 2006

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    A beautiful, heart filled sharing, sweetie! Most awesomely penned! I wish you all the best of everything..always

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