It takes two so I'll lead, you follow
Lets do it tonight so we are free tomarrow
Tangled in knots and even more twisted
We'll find stuff we never knew existed
On the table, under the bed and on the floor
We'll need some appliances so I'll go to the store
I'll lift you up when your at your peek
You know we haven't done this in over a week
I'll get the bottom and you'll get on top
I'll go all night until you say stop
Ain't no if's, ands, or but's about it
We could do it at the mall but its too crowded
Thank you so much for saying yes
And cleaning my house that is a mess
Author notes
HAHAHA you thought i was talkin' about making love HAHAHA but nope just cleaning house!!!!!!!!!! We could do it at the mall HAHAHA
Please tell me what you think
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I love it!!
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I am going to send this to all my friends who live close enough to help me clean!!! Love it, Darling, you are so good at these funny poems!
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NICE
Andrew - - - - you are halarious!!!!! Great write! This is an awesome poem! You've got such an awesome tallent!!!!!
Love reading from you! -Jenna xXx
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Flat out funny!!!!! You ROCK!! lol
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LOL You got me!!
What a clever and witty write, makes you ponder until the very end. I wish I could find someone to do mine, I hate chores!!!!
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Well all I can say to this immensely arduous prelude to????? You said what women seldom get to say"There aint no and ifs' and buts about it" ...He helped clean Your House Right...AND IT WAS A MESS! RIGHT? You sure know how to rouse our curiosity...Was his cleaning your house part of your Christmas present..The Queen of Humour has just been crowned!...You tease, and master of curiosity! At this time of year...All we can do is LAUGH! Lots of skill, and more than the game of Jeopardy!in this one...Good humourous write!
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cute, but ya cant clean your house at the mall, so how can it be too crowded.? not knocking ya. i love the mystery behind it and the way you wrote it. that part just seemed to sit out of place to me. anyways, thanks for sharing.
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This was great..But..I knew it was not making love for that would be to obvious. I did not however think of cleaning house. It was a cleaver piece and I enjoyed the read. thanks for sharing.
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That was a good chuckle. I love it! It was my first laugh of the day, and the day is almost over. Thank you for such a humorous poem!
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haha drew you're such a flirt with all your poetry and I love it! I personally don't think line numbers 3 and 4 fit in with the rest of the poem. Great great job!
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Written with great humour as always! Reading your poetry is so fun and it always brings smile to my face.
Thanks for such misleading piece and laughs!
Jan
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LOL Drew, you are such a delight!!! Your pure heart just makes everyone love you! This has just made my day. Hugs, Patricia
Merry Christmas, Drew!!
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Lol.. you're a dork!! The good kind though, don't worry
. Nice write also, keep it up. Peace.
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well...lol! i thought you were serious. you effing rock drewce!!!!! you effing rock my sox this made me wonder and was a true kick!!!! -
God Ilove you lmao!!! You and your twisted mind! Wonderful write. Surprising ones like this are brilliant. Wonderful Job! Merry Christmas to you and your family and be safe NEw Years Ok!!Love ya
Emily
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You are always the humorous poet.....so well done here and thanks for making me laugh....always good to do that...smiles, Terry
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