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~ Numbered Passion ~

 



Angelically painted face

wears a mischievous grin

while cradled in a frame of

silken chestnut strands

dipped with burgundy highlights

 

Emerald orbs inflamed

with devilish desires

begins softly singing

an alluring siren's song

of lust-filled need

 

Sleek olive toned flesh

draped in delicate white lace

sprawls out across a

satin covered dance floor

for midnight indulgence

 

Fingers masquerade gingerly

displaying bold caresses

taunting

&

teasing

daring you forth

begging for your heated touch

 

Approaching desire's threshold

a little wicked grin forms

across your hungry lips

and my lust-filled need

emanates from regions nether

 

Over turned on all fours

eyes lock – inseparable -

while crawling across

passion's playground

like a cat on the prowl

 

French tipped claws

shred concealing fabrics;

marring delicious flesh

in a primitive urgency

of life's sweetest sin

 

Heated bodies descend

with carnal intentions

morphing

&

mimicking

numbered passion

in the form of six and nine

 

Fevered hands roam

as your thirsty tongue

delves into my well

of liquid euphoria

and endless nourishment

 

Starving lips feast,

devouring you whole

in an undeniable hunger

for your blissfully salted release

into a rapturous writhing

 

Electrifying jolts surge forth

causing twinned orgasmic release

into an intoxicating ecstasy

of animalistic cravings sated

in complete exhaustion


Author notes

For Kain

A very long over due dedication of/for inspiration.

Hope you enjoy my dear!


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  • XercesBlue
    June 17, 2007

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    Wonderfully Steamy!

    Holy S!!!! This is one of the steamiest pieces that ever caught my attention. I love the number reference...hot hot hot!!!


  • Griswold silver member
    June 17, 2007

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    GULP!!

    Oh good Lord, I'm going to have a heart attack reading all these, now this contest has brought out some very sexy works, and this one is smoking HOT...Scott


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 16, 2007

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    Oooh yeah, my sister! Oooh yeah! Now this is HOT and sizzling for sure! Loved this! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest!


  • Kain
    January 9, 2007
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    A cold shower is required, methinks.. /..of six and nine/.. *HO*ly hell....


  • yumesandman
    January 5, 2007

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    Woot!

    Bit of a scandalous pic for AP, don't you think? Not that I'm complaining, lol.

    Very sexy. It's a bit classic and kind of stereotypical for erotica, but it is good erotica- nice to see someone who knows how to write more than just clumsy movement. I did like the blend between the "passion side" and the "feeling/thinking side", because even during sex you are having the occasion random thought.

    The one thing I did notice was the timing difference between the seduction/lust and the actual act. It makes it seem like you were little embarrassed to write the real sex part- which even I am, and I've been writing erotica short stories for nearly four years now. It's not too big of deal, but with erotica where that stable, slowly heating mood is important, a little difference in how the poem is paced can be noticed in seconds.

    So, something to think about for your next one. Amazing job, very very sexy, definitely a good poem.


  • yumesandman
    December 29, 2006
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    Okay, first off, haven't read the poem yet! (I don't read them until the end so I can judge more fairly). Secondly, I don't know what option you're going for! I'm guessing number 6? Either respond to this or PM me! And yes, I promise a good and long review at the end of the contest.

    Good luck!


    • Celticmoon
      December 29, 2006
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      Again,

      Please accept my apologies.

      option #6


      • yumesandman
        December 29, 2006
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        Hehehe, and again, no problem at all, just got to make sure all the bookwork's in order.

  • Cereus Opus
    December 24, 2006

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    8 outta 10

    after reading this piece several times, oh the sensual
    side of my imagination was released, although reading erotic poetry is not in my library, this piece had me
    only slightly throbbing, yet a well written use of the imagery but no climax (too animalistic). a better title would be "The Number of Passion".


  • Blazing White Wolf
    December 23, 2006
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    well doone on this steamy piece, My lioness... I am sure kain will get a rise out of this one

    Love,
    Master

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