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Freedom

Death is her only freedom
her, being the lost mother
never seeing her child
and never loving another

Death is her only freedom
her, being locked in love
Is she alone in it
Is this a one way street

Death is her only freedom
her, being lost in pain
In this boat he rides with her
But is their pain the same

Death is her only freedom
her, who has lost it all
her who wants her love back
she cries to the heavens for it

Death is my only freedom
for I have lost my everything
My child, My heart and soul

Death is my only freedom
because
I've no will to live anymore

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  • legendofcj
    December 24, 2006

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    Wow, such powerful words.... this really stuck out to me

    Death is her only freedom
    her, being lost in pain
    In this boat he rides with her
    But is their pain the same

    I understand how that feels... to have someone next you in your pain but they can never understand what you are going through..