Warm moisture trails
delicate flesh,
tingling.
Caressing buds
tease and taste
sensual essence.
The whisper of fiery tongue
pressing hard
to blazen secretions.
Explore, with depth,
every hill,
every valley.
Drink deeply,
the forbidden nectar of love.
Inhaling intoxication
of lustful desires.
Let our bodies become one,
to culminate in
orgasmic explosion.
Taken captive by
euphoric highs,
to crash again and again
against the shores of
climactic ecstasy.
In the silence of midnight black,
hear the echoes
of my call of the night.
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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I need a smoke!
A cold shower please! This is really nice. I like it a lot. Not too dirty, but very erotic. Great write! The Shaker (thanks for your comment on my works)
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Thank you for the comments, most appreciated.
Storm
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Great
A beautiful write Storm -
So tingling!
Awww, this was so beautiful. Makes me quiver all over.
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Thanks Penman, appreciate your comments.
Storm
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when i found the intro intreguing to this poem in particular i had no idea what to expect and now i'm a bit taken back, absolutely fantastic writing, i hope to one day be this good.
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Thanks for the comments, much appreciated.
Storm
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Great
Very well done Storm
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Yowza!
Oh my that is intensely hot! Oh, I'm on fire now. Someone needs to hose me down!
Sounds like someone on the prowl. 
Splendid write as always! 
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Thanks hun, appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoyed.
Storm
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Fires burn
You have penned a great poem here, so well written with such flow and rthym, the pictures you painted in the minds of the reader ar vivid, yet tasteful, You have done a great job here. Blessings John
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Thank you John. Appreciate your comments hun.
Storm
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Woo hoo Autumn, very nice. Seductive images, sensual feeling, hot all around. Leaves me wanting more.
My love to you
Vickie
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Thanks hun, glad you liked it. Appreciate your comments.
Storm
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Intoxicationg
'Drink deeply,
the forbidden nectar of love.
Inhaling intoxication
of lustful desires.'
Wow, if you can bottle this, I'll take a twelve pack. Otherwise, a very nice poem. Went well with my cereal, my yawns, and my sleepy eyes. ~~~James
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Thank you James. If I could bottle it, I'd probably be rich as all get up. I wish. Glad you enjoyed.
Storm
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Perfect ~
You ALMOST went over the edge into erotic....and then you so beautifully pulled it all back together with the most sensual write ~
One of the prettiest/sensual poems I have read in a while ~
Even loved the font and background color ~
Great job ~
Bear ~
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Thank you so much for your kind comments, truly appreciate it. Tried to stay on that verge of not going over that edge, leaving the reader to illuminate their own finale.
Storm
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