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What I feel inside

What I feel inside for you my friend ain't right.
I sit here thinking about you day and night,
Making myself wish to hold you tight.
I don't ever wanna make you cry,
Or even hear you sigh.
I hate it when we fight,
I can't stand it with all my might
I know hearts are fragile
But I love it when you make me smile
I watch you with these eyes as you walk on by
So tell me now if I wasn't scared to try,
Would everything turn out alright?
Or would you push me aside,
And tell me I'm just a friend,
'Cause I really need to know where I stand,
Whether you want me by or side
Or away from your sight!!

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  • DeathlyAngel
    January 31, 2008
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    This is really good. I like it. Great job.


  • Desideria
    December 23, 2006

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    i can relate to this so well right now its an amazing write!!! line three needs a little twicking but other than that its a great poem!