Away from earthly scents that drone
Obbessively human, rid me
to wear the ripples of the sea
Blend and belong in a sweet haze
Drown lovingly,if dreams were doors.
In a list
A contest entry
- Ponder by Elora Danon.
450 points, ended December 22, 2006, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love that idea, if dreams were doors. Thanks for the entry.
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Fabulous
The richness and the flow of your imagery is spot on. I love the idea of "wearing the ripples of the sea". Wonderful work! Best of luck to you!
~Elora~
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If dreams were doors...sparks out at me, from your other, also poteic words. And tells me that if dreams were doors, I could open one any time. And live from one dream to another. Well, that is my fantasy as I read your lovely words!
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