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Good Intentions

She tells him to go away,
He proceeds to follow her.
She tells him she hates him,
He says he loves her all the more.
Even when she's cold and bitter, he still cares.
He knows the pain she's endured;
Little does she know he's felt it too.
He just wants to make her laugh;
To see a smile light up her face.
He just wants to hold her;
To let her weary head rest upon a strong chest.
He just wants to comfort her;
To tell her she's not alone in the world.
He just wants to love her,
And for her to love him too.

Author notes

Umm yeah. I wrote this poem awhile ago just on a random whim. It doesn't have any personal meaning or anything.

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  • mistress9
    April 4, 2007

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    I LOVE IT

    MARISA!! i love it...it kinda reminds me of Gone with the Wind, but my mind RUNS on GWTW. I LOVE IT!! i want the guy from the poem!! give him to me!!


  • When September Ends
    December 30, 2006
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    Awe, it's so sweet!!!


  • ladynigritude
    December 22, 2006
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    :3 Awwhh <333


  • MarimbaMiss
    December 22, 2006

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    i like it a lot.....i think that every girl would like a guy who cares that much.......i love it becuz it is sweet ......its a wonderful write!!! thanks for the read~
    ~*~ in love in death~*~

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