They call me bloody Rayne for a reason…
I leave a trail of blood in my wake…
Many years have flowed by in my life
None has come to interrupt my works of art
Though there is one who watches me
Fulfill to rid the earth of this filth
That never seems to decrease from my work
Leave the door unlock to see if your curiosity
Will bring you closer into my domain
Drag my unconscious victim into the basement
I sense wondrous eyes peering down the stairs
Strap the human onto a solid metal table
Hooks piercing into the arms and legs
As restraints to hold him down when I begin
Place a needle into the veins in his arms
Linked to a tube leading to a bubbling liquid
With each heartbeat the liquid draws nearer
Creaking of the stairs stopped my work
Gaze at the young human entering my home
His eyes fill with lust and desire to help
Touch his face and tell him to only watch
Heartbeats begin to spread the liquid in veins
Eyes opening with hints of silver
Cries of pain escape from blue hue lips
Look over to the boy to see smiles appear
A sickening grin flourishes on his soft face
Whimpers come forth as the metals race through
Hardening ever so softly in his capillaries
Pushing metal stops as the thumping ends
Come here my boy and help with this next part
Grab onto the hardened metal coming forth from the vein
Pull on it with all your strength in your body
Gushing and cracking echo in the room
Bones broken from the scraping metals
Without a frame the body collapses into a pile
With a kink the metal frame falls to the floor
Love has a strange way of finding one another
Death and blood has found someone for me
Kye, help me slaughter off the worlds filth
We will create wakes of blood from our wrath
Author notes
Damnit. Not a lot of gore in this one. Just about Rayne finding love.
Option 7.
In a list
Gorey hehe. Kinda not really.
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how i wish you were still alive. i call myself Rayne.....i wish i would've met you while you were alive. i will meet you on the other side, dear.
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Touching.... I liked it very much..
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Dark
i like it, where do you get these good backgrounds from, could you please tell me, but anyways, very good poem, keep it the great work
red roses
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awsome!!!!!!
i rather like this one! and love wow, ... should we expect double trouble in the next one? 
great write anyway, very fluid in rhyme and tone. Keep it up amo!!
^+_+^ me
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lol, it is still good without the gore, mainly cause you are a great writer, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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This was very well written. It was darkly beautiful. I enjoyed this poem. The details were creative and very vivid. Thank you for your entry. Best of luck in my contest.
By the way, I’m glad you’re making use of the backgrounds I posted when I had my gold membership. It’s nice to know they’re being used for people’s poetry.
- Andi
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Quite welcome. I was waiting for the right poem to use this with. I think I have some more of yours too. They're great backgrounds. I'm happy that you enjoyed the poem as well.
Chaos
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AWWWW.......thas a DORE able ^^
i give you a rose.. may it turn black when u and kye both hold it...LOVE .......how adorable and this ones quite romantic...^^.....and no not too gorey but truelly a unqiue piece..I CANT SPELL DEAL WITH IT>!!!!!!!!!! and oh yeah......
love ya...
mensch!
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Stellar/Twizted/Beautiful In The True Dark Form
wow rayne,you never disappoint me, yes this is a tad less gorey than most of your work,but it's still as stellar,twizted and beautiful as all the rest in the true dark form that you pen,I love your work,everytime I read your work I can picture it,you know you really should write scripts for horror films,I would gladly pay for the ticket to watch...
AP Sis
BCE
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