As angels speak through silence
they slowly sing their songs
all feelings shown through codes of love
and words said face to face.....
To have two mothers a child is blessed
one being real and the other one graced
loving them both in such different ways
one across seas while the other seen every day
every day here I am swathed with loving arms
from my real mother of beauty,intelligence and charm
while the other my mother from across the seas
can look at my pictures and just vision me.
They both I admire so whole heartedly
I am only thirteen yet they both understand me
inspiration is found in both of their souls
yes me with two mothers through songs and poems
my mother Sea Angel speaks to me through her words
ecouraging and loving I feel so deserved
I am blessed through this site to have been bound to me
with pixiu's written I'm inspired by her true glee
her poetry speaks to me so spiritually sure
through palms upon cheeks our love codes are pure.
My real mother at home she is really my step
yet she has raised me with love replacing what I didnt get
and as I strum my guitar and the keybord she plays
we become our own band as our songs softly play
a stepmother for sure as there is no other
she is the one yes in my life my real mother
she took on this role when I was a young girl
and has raised me well to become someone in this world.
So you see why I speak of the luck in my life
God sent me two mothers--the Sea and my fathers wife
It's not every day that a young girl like me
can feel love and beauty of these two gifts bestowed to thee
In a daughters eyes so clearly seen
I count my blessing of two mothers for me
so I speak from my heart and in two different ways
I will promise to cherish them both for all of my days.
HALEIGH VS
Author notes
This poem was written for my loving stepmother Tanya and for my loving AP mother known as Sea Angel. I love them both deeply.
I chose opton #2
HALEIGH
A contest entry
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Your mothers are lucky to have you.
A sweet poem, rhyming too.
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I love the poem
I love the words and I love the poem, the title not so original, Sence their is already a song . But you are an amazing young writer and I look forward to watching you grow, You hang in here and never stop writing! You will do well
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Beautiful all I have to say.
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love this emotion that the poem brings...love inspires so much from the heart, and great and wonderful write...bravo
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I thought that this was a grat write. You are a very special person to be loved so much. You are a very talented writer. Good luck inmy contest and keep up the good work.
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hi i really like your second stanza and i thought the flow was very good thank you for entering and good luck
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Haleigh our On Line Angel
You are such a beautiful, loving soul that any mother is blessed to be cherished in your angelic heart. A daughter any mom would be proud to have. I rejoice to see how much you have in common with your step-mom. Truly, she sounds heaven sent to both you and your dad. God Bless You and All those dear to you A LOT and always for you "are" a blessing. Amen and Amen
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wow, that was amazing. the having two mothers.... i`ve never seen anything like that on here. amazing. Thanks for entering. ♥in s a t ia b le
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Very well done
What a wonderful poem! It is written with much love!
I´m glad that you found two such loving mothers!
Very well done and thanks for sharing!
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awesome write
Honey you really out did yourself here I havent read such a beautiful poem like this in a long while . You have the makings of an author in time and a great one . I started writing when I was your age and I now have a book comeing out called patty"s Poetry To Remember it will be in book stores real soon. never stop writting and let your heart pour through your fingertips -
Beautiful
Well I must say that this is a little to long for the contest.
However, I must admit this is soooooooo sweet
Writing about loving two mothers... Interesting. One mother can provide the world so I can just imagine what two can do.
Thank you so much for sharing this great poem with us and making it an entry in my very first contest.
Good luck to you.
tender
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awwww this is sweet
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This is very good spiritual poem, i love the positive and loving vibe this piece gives off. Lovely work
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a beautiful and spiritual write. An excellent use of words and imigary.
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well done on this poem you have done a realy good job thank you for sharing it with us sorry i didnt get to read it before my contest closed lol there was just so many xxx
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Beautiful Haleigh you are really blessed as you have not 1 but 2 loving and respectful Mothers, love you always Aunt Josie xxooxoxo
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I too have two mothers, alas both are gone from this earthly palce now but I understand you love and grace in respect to both of them. What wisdom speaks from someone so young, to understand about such things and then to pen this truly beautiful deidication. It sums up the contest perfectly. Heartfelt. Hugs to you.
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On Line Angel
This is very deep, and heart-felt ... Touching, and raw ... Beautifully written, you should be very proud of this write !
Keep it up
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Wow, this is a great write, very touching and emotional! I hope one day my son will feel this way about me
Great job!
--You have just been Dented--
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Excellent Dedication
What a wonderful poem you have penned and dedicated to two loving souls. I love the word choices you have made here and the heart felt emotions they inspire. Very well done my fellow poet. Merry Christmas. ~PeacE~Gary~ -
Wow, very well done and powerful. Thanks for sharing this one.
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This is so touching and beautiful.
So I speak from my heart and in two different ways
I will promise to cherish them both for all of my days.
So sweet and deep. I love it. thank you for this great poem expressing your feelings from the heart.
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Very Nice
It is great that you feel so blessed by your mothers. I am sure that SEA will feel honored. I lived with an aunt for a while and she was like a mother in many ways. She helped me to succeed in high school.
Andy
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Great write! Thanks for entering my contest!
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