Many times I told myself I would never see you again
I tried to erase you to contain you and yet you return
There is no end
You flood my mind and I dream of you
Ripples of you collide with my freshly built walls and instantly they all wash away
Like the tides you embrace overwhelm and then retreat
You are never gone
A contest entry
- love has left you by hippy love.
330 points, ended January 11, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i really like this poem thanx for sharing it with me and give and chance to see your work it was what i was looking for sorry i didnt get to judge it in time there were just so many to read xxx
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good
Wow, the poems you come across when clicking on random. I'm familiar with the feelings and thoughts conveyed in this poem. "Like the tides you embrace, overwhelm and then retreat" is my favorite part of this wonderful poem.
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It's really good for being so short. Just short enough to keep me interested but long enough to show the emotion. Thumbs up!
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Protoman!
thank you for making my first feedback comment a positive one. I have liked all of your writing so far and am looking forward to reading more
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