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Please Find Me

 

I remember you

remember every curve
every line of your face
every beat of your heart

your voice so sweet
like whispers.. in my mind

your soul
the depth of your heart
the touch of your hands

the feeling of you upon me
enclosing me in unmeasurable softness

taking and tempting my love
washing me in desire
cleansing me
within

taking me
beyond myself
lost within your flesh
as i pressed myself upon you

i remember you
my woman from a thousand
glorious dreams

coming to me as i sleep
to touch me once again

as i dream

i beg you
almost pleading

please find me



LeeL

Author notes

Just wonderful words from my dreams for my friend and love, whomever she may be

A contest entry

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  • Treegirl11 gold member
    April 29
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    Wow this one hits home too


    • Endeavor gold member
      September 28
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      Tree Girl


      If it touched you
      then you have been in this place

      Thank you for reading me
      Rick

  • Faithbound gold member
    February 26

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    How often have some of lay awake at night crying out those words...please find me. Hoping that if we cry loud enough one might hear. Again you are lovely. Your words are written with such emotion and pleasure. I truly have missed you. Trina.

    • Endeavor gold member
      February 26
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      Morning Trina


      Thank you for always reading me
      I have anguished for the same words myself
      Such is life

      Rick

  • Hekate gold member
    January 6

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    This was really beautiful. The romance in this piece is very soft and sensual. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
    Kari


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 6
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      Hi Kari


      Thank you for saying beautiful
      Pleased you liked my thoughts

      Rick

  • raggyann
    January 2

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    this is so beautifuly written. i love this so very much
    you are the master of romance writting


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 2
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      raggyann


      Thank you foe speaking of me, in Romance
      They are words I have a personel feeling for

      I have been blessed by inspiring women
      they gave ME the words, through who they are

      In a womans absence, I have few thoughts to say

      Rick

  • flyinghigh
    November 2, 2007
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    I have found you. I was searching for you for a long time.

    • Endeavor gold member
      November 12, 2007
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      Dear Flying


      That is a great responce for a verse

      I will take that as a credit to my words

      Thank you for reading me

      Rick

  • kdanielle
    October 22, 2007

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    wow. that is great! I love it! it is so simple, but it is so perfect in words! Thanks for sharing!

    • Endeavor gold member
      October 22, 2007
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      Danielle


      If you wrote a few more words
      I could have Stared you back points... lol

      Thank you for caring for my thoughts

      Rick

  • Daizy21
    September 23, 2007

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    Yet another beautiful write, I dont think that I will ever be able to enough of your words,thank you for this.m

    • Endeavor gold member
      September 23, 2007
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      Daizy


      That is a wonderfull comment to me

      Thank you for caring for my words

      Rick
  • mysty rain
    September 20, 2007

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    Your readers will always be women, and the men that read your words will always be envious because you know how to express your feelings. The woman in your life will always remain yours, for you have such sweet words for her. She will never have to find you for you are there for her. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain


    • Endeavor gold member
      September 23, 2007
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      Mysty Rain


      Interesting thoughts
      My readers are almost all women
      and I believe the rest of your words as well

      Thank you for being my Friend

      Rick
  • nothinghere silver member
    September 8, 2007

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    Any woman would be blessed to have such gorgeous words penned for her. It is the dream also to be loved that way by almost every woman on the planet, that universal language we all speak or long to learn.... you have warmed the heart and removed the tears that came with the last one I read

    Karen


    • Endeavor gold member
      September 23, 2007
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      Morning Karen


      The words and thoughts are truly universal in love
      In every country I have been in, lovers behave the same
      The eyes convay the same adoration
      touches and jestures the same

      Thank you for praising my words

      Rick

  • heygoo
    August 22, 2007

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    This is beautiful and surely must have been what she wanted to hear. Lovely use of imagery. It is wonderful to find someone who loves you, lines on your face, and all.


    • Endeavor gold member
      August 22, 2007
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      Heygoo


      Thank you for reading my words
      I always write from life
      This was my feelings that day

      Thank you for saying beautiful

      Rick

  • mypassion
    August 10, 2007

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    I love this from beginning to end, perfect pitch and tempo, but this is the part I like the most

    taking and tempting my love
    washing me in desire
    cleansing me
    within

    taking me
    beyond myself
    lost within your flesh
    as i pressed myself upon you


    Great write dear friend,

    me


    • Endeavor gold member
      August 10, 2007
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      Hi Me


      So nice to have you read me

      If I am allowed to like my own work

      I love the thought of this

      Rick

  • my-masquerade
    August 4, 2007

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    quite beautiful and simple but I can imagine that yes that would be something many women would like to hear.

    • Endeavor gold member
      August 10, 2007
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      Masquerade


      Thank you for saying beautiful

      I appreate your thoughts

      Rick

  • moon2u silver member
    July 29, 2007

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    Breathtaking

    This is heaven...yes, there is this knowing when souls that are destined to be meet, as if they have danced in another life together....they know at once they have found the other half of their heart.

    so beautiful
    moon2u


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 29, 2007
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      Moon2u


      it is impossable to give to the world
      the thoughts that realy linger in my mind

      I can only part a jester so small
      that others may pear in and see my anguish, slightly

      The rest is know to me and my God

      I thank you for reading

      Rick
  • bergettigirl
    July 25, 2007
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    Each part of this poem takes you in deeper and feel the love. A prayer well said indeed


  • Jalalbel gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    sounds like my own plea

    Please find me sounds like my plea to myself or to a higher power. I sometimes feel like a little girl lost. I think your poem could also be a prayer- one of the few that reach heaven.
    Smile,
    Judy


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 23, 2007

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      Judy


      Yes a plea

      I wish because I know she exist
      It is mixed all thru my words
      Somthing that perminates my mind

      A prayer is very close

      Thank you for feeling my words so well

      Rick

  • azlyn gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    Another Gold that I really love. You write so many romantic poems yet they all have their own flavor and feel. It is really difficult to tire of your reads when you make them each on a journey anew. Very nice write this truly was.
    Azlyn


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 7, 2007
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      Very kind comment from you

      I think the words are as varied as the stages we go thru
      Different people solisit different emotions from us as well

      In the end, I worry for me

      Rick

  • Unheard Butterfly
    July 4, 2007

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    Congrats! in winnin' the gold,
    I loved all of your beautiful words,
    & I felt all of the emotion,
    Great Job,
    ~Breanna


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 4, 2007
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      Butterfly


      Thank you for feeling my words

      Thank you for saying beautiful

      Rick

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    June 18, 2007

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    Wow, this is so beautiful Rick!
    I am sure that any woman would love
    to hear these words. Very heartfelt
    dedication to that special someone
    in your life. Congratulations to you
    on winning the Gold with this one!
    A truly well deserved and well written
    piece here! Keep up the wonderful work
    my friend and thanks for sharing it!




    Jeremy0826

    • Endeavor gold member
      June 18, 2007
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      Hi Jeremy


      Thank you for taking the time to read my words

      I always look for you thoughts

      Rick
  • dandelioness
    June 17, 2007
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    a plea for the dreamlover
    i know this well
    applause

    • Endeavor gold member
      June 17, 2007
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      Dandelioness


      I know this well, says a lot

      Thank you for readong this

      Rick

  • michellemybelle gold member
    June 10, 2007
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    just rereading your lovely words

    • Endeavor gold member
      June 17, 2007
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      Michelle


      Thank you for reading this again

      I consider that a great complement

      Love, Rick

  • blondone silver member
    June 9, 2007

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    Love is poured and ink spilled all over this write you are the master at the Love poems I wish you all the best Rick and you know that everything happens for a reason and you are what you believe and you are a very kind and Loving person always remember that


    • Endeavor gold member
      June 9, 2007
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      My Friend


      Your comment was wonderfull
      I think you are using my own words upon me...lol

      You are so sweet to speak as you do
      I always appreate you

      Rick

      PS: the evolving picture of you is amazing

  • ICOMMANDyou2boogie
    May 29, 2007
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    I really like this poem. Very sweet and gently spoken.


  • abstract reality
    May 26, 2007

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    Beautiful

    It is so simple to love someone..
    yet takes so much to write such good work about them..
    i am still awed by your work...
    beautiful..touching...so much love in each line...
    "wow"


  • Sandygram silver member
    May 20, 2007

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    Wonderful rite

    Hello Rick, I can see why this poem won a Gold. It so deserved it. Your words were Sweet, Soft and Sensual and makes us Sigh!!! I can so relate to your words. We all long for that love we can not be with. Thanks for sharing. You are a gifted writer. Hope all is well with you.

    Bless you,

    Sandy

    • Endeavor gold member
      May 20, 2007
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      Hi Sandy

      Thank you for asking after me

      I wish all women could find a male that will treasure them

      It is deserved by birth if they grow to become precious

      Rick

  • A u r i e l l e
    May 12, 2007

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    i think i read this. What i like the most is still these lines

    i remember you
    my woman from a thousand
    glorious dreams

    coming to me as i sleep
    to touch me once again

    as i dream



    I remember thse. So soft
    and vey creative

    • Endeavor gold member
      May 20, 2007
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      Aurielle


      Yes my friend

      I love the words as well

      I thank you for feeling them

      Rick
  • pozo
    May 7, 2007

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    Wow- this is so romantic I liked this piece, congrats on the gold trophy
    Thanks for your comments
    Pozo


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 7, 2007
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      Pozo


      Thank you again for reading my words

      The Gold was a nice suprise

      Rick

  • Pretty Little Thing
    May 6, 2007

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    Very well written, a great demonstration of emotion backed by powerful imagery, rhythm, and flow. Nice job.


  • ScarletO
    May 5, 2007

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    I see why you won gold for this one. I felt this one very powerfully strong and loved every minute of it. The power of love makes this whole scene much more desirable and fulfilling. A wonderful poem to read and dream upon.


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 5, 2007
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      Hi Scarlet


      Thank you for feeling my words
      I wish I could create these every day
      A feeling like this comes to us only in our best moments

      I made this to hold the memory

      Rick
  • mrajarams
    April 25, 2007

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    Great poem

    It is awesome. The poem is highly emotional and neatly presented. Sensual and sensational too. Keep writing such poems. I would be happy, if you could stamp your views on my poems.

    • Endeavor gold member
      May 5, 2007
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      Mrajarams


      Thank you for saying Awesome

      You felt this as it was intended

      I will read you soon

      Rick

  • perdisbeaute
    April 23, 2007

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    Simply beautiful. I can't express it any other way...this is just beautiful. Soft, sweet, romantic, tender...beautiful! I would definitely by your book! This is truly wonderful!

    Michelle


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 5, 2007
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      Hi Michelle


      Thank you for saying beautiful

      I hope the reading world likes my book

      You are very kind

      Rick
  • Sam Is I
    April 23, 2007
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    Im a sucker for romance every girls dream is to find someone to fall in love with them i loved it.

    • Endeavor gold member
      May 5, 2007
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      Hi Winter


      I love it is very good

      I hope you find your romance

      Rick

  • Talking Toni gold member
    April 22, 2007

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    Very Tastefully Written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This is very sensual, yet tastefully written. You show here the very essence of what you live and dream for. Passion here is so heated yet tender and warm from your heart. ANy woman you would write this for would be bound to you for eternity entranced in the beauty of your words. Superb job!!!!Thanks for sharing yourself so intimately with us!!!!~Toni~


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 5, 2007
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      Hi Toni


      I like this, I quote...

      "Any woman you would write this for would be bound to you for eternity, entranced in the beauty of your words."

      Cool, so I`ve got that going for me

  • michellemybelle gold member
    April 19, 2007

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    Just rereading some of your favorites, some of the comments, they are all lovely.
    I hope you find her and this plea is forever answered.
    best always,
    Michelle

    • Endeavor gold member
      May 5, 2007
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      Michelle

      The answer is in the room, with the two big flowers...

      .

    • Endeavor gold member
      April 19, 2007
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      Morning Girl


      Thank you for comming back to read this
      The words are some of my favorites
      As far as finding her, I will let you know first

      Rick

  • -Ink Artist-
    April 16, 2007

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    So subtly sensual! Almost entrancing one to a dream-like state. Your softly placed alliteration and the depth of emotion grab the reader immediately and pull us in...to the whisper in your mind. Lovely work!


    ~Lori


    • Endeavor gold member
      April 16, 2007
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      Hi Lori


      Subtle sensual is my favorite

      This is from a repetive dream I have

      If I ever see her face, I will know her at once

      Thank you for your comment

      Rick

  • Electric Sunrise Moderators member
    April 8, 2007

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    Smooth operator

    Truly, it brought memories to the forefront, of a forgotten and lost love. A serenade if nothing more of epic proportions, although you'll never be approached by hallmark for a card, this is only because your style is above and beyond them, kudos to you


  • Tabitha-Robin
    March 25, 2007

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    Oh, your words yet melt me once again. This is such a beautiful plea. You are an excellent writer and I love it so very much. I sure have missed reading your words. Keep it up my wonderful friend. Oh, one more thing. I love the new picture of you, it is great.

    Tabby


  • panegyric ink
    March 22, 2007

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    as gold as gold gets.

    as original as thoughts and feelings will ever get.
    Rick, i gotta say this is poetry!!!! i cannot come close to tell you that i know i cannot express my feelings as well as yours. your caring and love in words are forever's poetry!!!!!!!!

  • ennovy silver member
    March 19, 2007

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    Marvelous Feast of Words

    Just had to read this one again...heartfelt words of passionate dreams..."A man without dreams has no direction," so my Father said. You have beautiful direction into the soul and hearts of women....novy

    • Endeavor gold member
      March 19, 2007
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      Novy

      Your father is so correct

      God save me if I ever loose my dreams, or my Goals to make them go

      Thank you for caring for my words

      Rick

  • la dolce vita silver member
    March 19, 2007

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    i remember you
    my woman from a thousand
    glorious dreams

    coming to me as i sleep
    to touch me once again

    as i dream

    i beg you
    almost pleading

    please find me


    excellent , I hope she does find you


    • Endeavor gold member
      March 19, 2007
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      Jamila

      Thank you for quoting me

      She is somewhere out on my horizen to be seen

      Thank you for saying Excellent

      Rick

  • Asdzaa Nadleehe silver member
    March 19, 2007
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    So very wonderful and worthy of gold


    • Endeavor gold member
      March 19, 2007
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      Nadleehe

      Thank you for saying worthy

      Nice face

      Rick

  • Spiritvision angel
    March 16, 2007

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    Fantastic write. It would please any to think their love would ask, please find me. In dreams we can have anyone and anything our mind is focused on. Imagine if all our dreams could come true. Beautiful my friend.

    • Endeavor gold member
      March 19, 2007
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      Bren

      Thank you for reading my words so closely

      Dreams do carry any posibility, at that time we are totally free

      Thank you for saying Beautiful

      Rick

  • ennovy silver member
    March 16, 2007
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    Magnificent Romantic Piece

    of work. You captured me with your most vivid words of tenderness. If all men, would tell their ladies what they wanted to hear..it would be some happy chicks for the old rooster to pick from..LOL..excellent prose, I totally enjoyed the read..........................ennovy


    • Endeavor gold member
      March 16, 2007
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      Hi Ennovy

      I am trying to figure how to pronoce your name... lol

      Thank you for reading this and liking my words

      You are kind

      Rick

  • Nature Song silver member
    March 14, 2007

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    Wonderfully, loving words that fill a woman's heart. Not only to be loved, but a love that goes beyond words. No wonder it won the gold! ~Sie


    • Endeavor gold member
      March 16, 2007
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      Sie

      Thank you for reading this

      I appreate your kind words

      This is from a reacuring dream

      Rick


    • Endeavor gold member
      March 14, 2007
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      Sie

      Great Name

      Thank you for cari