The life without love,
Like the moon turning away.
Flowers bending to the floor,
No elegant display.
The life without love,
Like the springs running dry.
Passion fading away,
Till the sparkle has gone.
The life without love,
Like the colours turning stale.
A heartbeat, breath, touch
All made simple and easy.
The life without love,
Like the dance ending early.
Before the finale came to shine.
Dull, muted tones in the life
The life without love
Author notes
1)Love is life. And if you miss love, you miss life.
Leo Buscaglia
A contest entry
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450 points, ended January 23, 2007, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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This is amazing! I love how you made the comparison of several things to the life without love. The repition was also a nice touch. It's a very simple write but it has so much to it. I loved it and thank you for entering. Good luck.
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