I've fallen...
so far,
into those warm speck of gold.
Breaking through the barriers that once surrounded
my most hidden treasure...
Burning through me so my desires now escape
then caught up by the flames of those hands.
Arching my back as I search for more,thrn letting me fall...
saying "relax."
Dont wake me up
never at all...
let love love and
let me be loved.
Didicated my wondefully made fiance....
copyrighted.
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Delighted to hear and all the best in the world
You have a couple of typos, like thrn instead of then, and wondefully rather then wonderfully. But the love, the joy and the passion come through loud and clear. Great!!
Love, Tom B.
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