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christmas haiku

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lights twinkle and shine
as santa rides through the night  
christmas day is here


dee garner
december 21, 2006

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  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    December 10, 2008
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    Im not a Haiku fanatic but its about Christmas so top marks
    Cyber Artist

  • Kim6
    September 5, 2007
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    Beautiful haiku.


  • Candy6
    June 8, 2007
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    very beautiful christmas haiku. i really like thanksgiving and christmas.


  • Phoenix Fighter
    January 11, 2007
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    I love Haiku, you seem to have much poetry on Christmas, which is a good thing.


  • panegyric ink
    January 8, 2007
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    very beautiful, what you've done for santa...

    ...is truly a gift for your readers!!!!


  • Vernal Bloom
    December 24, 2006

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    Although I’m not any good at English styles but it wasn’t hard to understand the beauty of your words, Auntie Dee. It was surely one of good haiku I ever read. Thank you for sharing :-)

    ~Massy~

  • Vernal Bloom
    December 24, 2006

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    Although I’m not any good at English styles but it wasn’t hard to understand the beauty of your words, Auntie Dee. It was surely one of good haiku I ever read. Thank you for sharing :-)

    ~Massy~


  • Mary O gold member
    December 23, 2006

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    lights twinkle and shine
    as santa rides through the night
    christmas day is here

    I can take so much for you simple write. I liken Santa to the splended moment of charity in us all effecting peace and joy upon the eve of Christmas. The twinkling stars of hope glow in the still dark night for the great expections to follow. Amazing how God through His Son Jesus, for over 2000 years, has truly taken care of His people. "Jesus is the reason for the Season." Merry Christ-mass to you and a Happy New Year
    ~Mary O

  • Ir.muse
    December 23, 2006
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    hi my lovely mom

    Very beautiful haiku.


    Shahrzad

  • Just4u
    December 22, 2006

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    :)

    No winds will howl nor drop of snow
    but still old Rudolph too will go...

    Hugs and Happy Holidays
    -Eddy


  • individuality gold member
    December 22, 2006

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    not long to go, but three days merry christmas. spill christmas into a haiku and twist me into the new year.


  • leo2
    December 22, 2006

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    The santa claus tradition is a very interesting story of how he came to be linked to Christmas. You've captured that moment well.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • catz Moderators member
    December 21, 2006
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    This started out to be a contest entry, then I decided it didn't fit... so here it is

    Dee


  • queen Moderators member
    December 21, 2006

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    Hopefully i have been good this year and he stops at my hous Very good haiku, good luck in the contest

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