Let..
Let the flames burn
and let the tides turn.
Let all the powers rise,
let them flame in my eyes.
Let the earth shake
and let the windows break.
Let the strong wind blow
and let the blood flow
Let the day turn into night,
let courage turn into fright.
Spirits of the dark rise,
help me lead a soul to its demise.
Help me, in my spells, devise,
and make me in evil, wise.
Hear me now as I call you near,
come to me and settle here.
Hear the call, I cry.
Let the evil ravens fly.
Come to me with the winds that blow
and unto me your powers bestow.
Let darkness rule the night.
Let none see good in sight.
Let the lightning strike,
and let it shatter every dike.
I call unto every evil power,
come to me, in my tall, dark tower.
Turn my fragile heart to stone.
Help me, so that I will not leave this soul alone!
Help me, in my potions, brew.
This soul shall get neither hint nor clue.
Toads' feet and bats' wings,
an ivy seed and hairs from evil kings,
into my cauldron fall.
Dark spirits attend to my call.
Extinguish every single light.
Let, blind, be every sight.
For tonight, I shall take my revenge,
my poor broken heart, I will avenge.
Tonight,the world of mortals shall know fear.
Dark spirits of the night, listen to me and hear:
The time is ripe, so come with me now,
to a mortal's destruction. Come I shall show you how.
I shall torture his body and his soul,
of his life I shall take control.
The love and the light in his life, I shall take,
happiness, prosperity and joy, all shall break.
I shall pluck him out of his world,
and into mine, he shall be hurled,
to live in darkness forever!
Does not he know? We will be together!
*says sarcastically and laughs a high-pitched evil laugh that echoes*
So, come now spirits, 'tis time to finish our spells', devise,
time to take a human soul to its demise!
By: Nada Adel Sobhi
Author notes
My evil side!
Option 1
In a list
A contest entry
- Dark, Love, Fantasy? by --Beautiful--.
550 points, ended February 18, 2007, 31 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Ultimate Goal by N e a r.
20000 points, ended June 2, 2008, 946 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Spells. by mystic-angel.
850 points, ended July 26, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the DARKWRITE challenge rides again by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
600 points, ended December 20, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems That Begin With The Letter 'L'. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
700 points, ended December 15, 2008, 112 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites Contest by tears.of.silence.
1000 points, ended April 18, 401 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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strange desires...
do you mean it?
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lol nice.. different from your writings I just read and I like to see different sides. you've got a 3 for this poem bringing you to a 60. great work.thanks for entering and best of luck to you. kahy
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Oh My~
Now this is one unique write but loved the weaving of words also the tight rhyme~
Excellent work of art presented based on the Challenge set~
the only thing I am nudged to say is-
when it comes to revenge-
that can get quite messy when energy sent out comes back
Congratulations on Your Trophies!
Bravo!!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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sweety, just remember that the Goddess herself requires payment from us when we ask this darkness of her.
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Though this is a little long for my personal taste, I won't deny that the true spirit of a dark write is afoot here. Your imagery is very vivid, and I thoroughly enjoyed the read! Well done & good luck!
Laura, aka Immortal
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Darkness and evil have been called upon and I really liked this one. It is different than most other dark pieces that I have read. Best of luck to you.
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Revenge themes always make a great write, and this is wonderful. Love the tale told here. Not to sure about the last lines in the ** but the rest is all good. Very neat read! Thank you for entering and good luck
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This is great. It holds a real feel to it as far as charms and the tone. Fun to read but packs a blow, can't mess with this heart! well done
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Merry meet,
Congratulations on winning an Honorable Mention. At first I wasn't sure where you were going with this, so I just hung on and enjoyed the ride and Man! what a ride you gave me. Note to self: don't hurt Nooni.
No, really though, this is really good work. I didn't see where your use of dyke (as per a comment) gave the sense of being derrogatory or as "gay-bashing". Very trip to the darkside.
Congratulations again on your win.
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Fantastic write! Just what I was looking for. Thanks for your entry, good luck.
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Amazing!
This is perfect. It is so dark and evil. It reminds me of all the evil witches...the queen from snow white, the witch from sleeping beauty and little mermaid. Very good!!! Thank you for joining my contest and good luck!
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Thank you so so much, You made me really hapy with your comment. I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem
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Absolutly Wonderful
GREAT JOB, SIS.This is an amazing write!! I love it. This poem is so vengeful,dark,and mystical. I love anything with magic in it.
Keep Writing
~~Meri~~
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This is a dark and sinister calling of the dark one giving up of control over self. Hope it's mere fantasy.As there are things on this Earthly plain unseen that may of been listening to you.Ha! Only kidding,I know white craft is your mainstay and you're knowledgable in knowing to not mess with the powers of darkness.You just gotta know,I'm into this offering.Great piece!~~Suseann
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Yeah, well, I had an evil side for a few days
and this was the result hehe
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and for your applauds! (I'll correct that)
Nooni
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Wow, very dark and vengeful, I fear for this man that dared try to break your heart. This is one of the things i love, a spell poem because I love all things wicca. It also seems to me you have watched Charmed and seen that power spell a few too many times. Any way, great poem, one line is a little too long, but that is ok. Great job.
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Thank you Tiphanie, I am really glad you enjoyed reading my spell poem. So far there is no real man who has broken my heart, but men should beware me now hehe. Yeah I love Charmed, and I have one of the books too!
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hmmmm
A theme long used , but it's one of my favourite themes, so I won't complain about cliches, lately everything became a cliche to say the least.
I too exact revenge in darkness, but in my case, it's a female that suffers (most of them actually..).
Good poem.
Though at certain times there have been a amount of interruptions to the flow, your lines seem to lengthen and shorten without a flow plan.
Otherwise it's nice,
Keep it up.
RD.
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Thank you RD, glad you enjoyed it.
Well I do not really want revenge on somebody, guess I was just influenced by Macbeth's witches lol. Or I was in my evil mood. But thnx anyway!
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OMG
Wow that was awesomely evil. I love it....though must you use the derrogative term dyke? It is so offending. Other then that I love it. It is like a spell...or maybe that is what you intended. It has such a steady rhythm and pace and I love the rhyming ^_^!!!! Awesome poem.
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I got out my dictionary again lol to see what is wrong with "dyke" well it could be spelt like that or "dike" but anyways I did not mean the "offensive slang word" it has nothing to do with my poem. I meant "dike/dyke" as "a long thivk wall that is built to stop the water from flooding an area of land"
Hope this helps,
thank you for the applauds,
Nooni
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You really have brought out something dark here. Choosing to rhyme gives this poem a somewhat sing-song note which is good because it makes each line stand out more. Lol, you reminded me of the the Witches in "Macbeth". This is written very well and shows your talent truly.
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Creepy
That was a chilling tail of the evil that lays dormant inside you Nada I like evil even though I know I shouldn't they always seem to be cooler the bad guys I mean. Nice write get at me whenever you get a chance!
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*Scared* :-P
At last my dear Nooni updated! Hey girl, these days you wrote so little. I’m glad to see a fresh write from you!
You have darken this poem too dark! Did you write this from the tongue of a evil? Yooy, *Scared* J/K the structure is excellent like always. Ahsantom sis.
Thanks for sharing and I wish you happy moments
~Massy~
PS. Nooni please think about entering my new contest at http://allpoetry.com/contest/2334989 you didn’t enter my previous one so I’ll be glad if you enter this one.
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so discriptive and full of energy. Lovin i
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Amazing
whoa this was amazing i truly adored your poem , i also liked how you were able the rhyme every word and keep the pattern going, see i can never do that lol, this was amazing, keep up the great work! -Pammie-
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Nooni is strong here...
I can hear the voice of the roar of dark cry through and through with its intensity as well..The structure and the pace of this poem is very sharply cutting the whole green area of this human jungle covering its state with its own dark power ..It is a very difficult work to script and to devise in such poetic verses..Nooni you are very strong in this expression here.. -
i can't see it from "my" witches POV, as I have been taught to harm none, but you did do a good job in showing that blackness does have a place here, as it does everywhere else...it's well written...INSPIRING, my fellow poet
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Thank you Tales. Oh you're a witch? or a wiccan? well It is a bit like the Charmed spells, only a lot longer. Well I am glad you liked it.
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Clear
This work is dark but clear, I understand how deep it bug the soul to spill the pain out that you have done, the spirituality of the poem show how spiritual you intend to be and grow but still i can say that was a good dark clear one.
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BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is such a dark poem but unlike others this is exceptionally brillant. It's a vrey powerful poem and i get the impression you have been hurt by a lover in the past. Absolutley brillant!!! i wish i could write like this, BRAVO keep writting because your v.talented. However i dont think the title quite sums up what the poem is about, it does work very well with th first line though.Perhaps soemthing could be added to let. Whatever you choose to do im sure it will be fantastic. take care. luv sian x -
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Thank you Sian. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. I could not thing of another title unfortuantely (and I have been hurt before, but I just felt like the "evil witch" for a change) lol
Thankx again
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cool write revenge is sweet lol/me and one of my friends went through this 'charmed' phase in fifth grade so we wrote our own book of shadows and i got so used to writing spells that i'd just being sitting down and something would come to me and i'd have to get a piece of paper and madly scribble out the words until i was forced to carry a book and pen with me every where i went i eventually grew out of it (thank god) but i defintely don't mind the odd spell or two...nice write i especially liked:
"Tonight,the world of mortals shall know fear.
Dark spirits of the night, listen to me and hear:"
Ooohhh...i'm scared! lol - i can't wait to read more of your work
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Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed reading this. I hope to write more, and if I do I'll be sure to IM you.. I have a potion coming up but it's not dark.
Thankx again
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wooooooooooow
oh my gooooooooooooooood and u said u hate the darkness hell ur a master and u werent lying in ur nickname since u r really a witch loved it and welcome to d dark side but i came here 1st so d cookies r mine
u have a hell of a darkside and oh the rhyming and d flow of words is amaziiiiiiiiing mwaaaaaaaaaah
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Thank you so so much ranooma! I am really glad you enjoyed reading this. Didn't know I had such a bad side till I wrote hehehe!
thankx for the applauds! Aren't you gonna share those cookies tayeb?? hahaha
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Wow i love it so dark and such a great choice of words. i just had to l eave u a comment lol
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Thank you Cotton Candy, I am glad you enjoyed it.
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