Im cold and alone,
with no one here to call my own.
A simple wish, of a friendship maybe a little more,
and everyone automatically labels you as a whore.
A person to talk to,
to smoke with,
to chill.
A simple wish looked at as blashpemy,
and Im looked at as if I am aimed to kill.
Im cold and alone,
I remember you but you dont remember me.
Why is that we were never ment to be.
You wrote me that poem,
the only one that brought me to tears,
I went to break it off,
but he ripped it in front of my face,
I feel as if I havent talked to you in years.
He doesnt know who this is about,
but he sees me everyday,
its my own god damn fault,
that everything turned out this way.
Please tell me what you think
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Bless you
This poem is good, he see's you even when he doesn't see you. Moving on is difficult and this poem is a good way for the reader to let go. Well done!
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ok....so yea i feel just a little bit of tension on this one....yea alot! im sorry for whatever it is that is going on in your life. Do what you have to do for yourself and dont give two shits what anyone else thinks. You are an awesome person Donna i love you lots! have a good christmas!
love always
Lacey -
It confused me a little,but that may have to do with the fact i have a ,mean ol baby tugging on my hair while i was trying to read,but from what i got i likes.You did a good job, keep it up, and start writing more! Gah it's been forever since you have written.
Anyway like i said great job and stuff.
Ashley & the mean ol baby -
well
umm...... ok then so i see what this is all aboot
so yea
ok do what you do and i hope everything works out for you
but
well fuck it
by the way you acted on the phone today you obviously want nothing to do with me so
whatever
have a nice life
goodbye -
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You dont know anything about this, I am sorry to say. It doesnt concern you or Tim, for that matter.
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