She calls the tune
Of my Avalon song
This sweet, sweet english girl
Then butters me up
The way she puts me on
Time to take the reins an' make my get away
So much for love
I can tell you this
She fires me up
With her english lips
We'll blitzkreig the world
Like a hurricane
Go cruisin' for a bruisin'
It's a hell of a game
She's a one way ticket
And I'm already damned...
So what's the catch?
I can tell you this
She just drives me wild
With her english lips
I can't hold it back
It's like a rising storm
With her arms and thighs
Just to keep me warm
I'm caught up in the middle
Of this english shrew
She make's a mess of me
'coz that's what she can do
Keep the covers up
I'm on my way again
For this english girl
I'd sell my soul for fame...
A contest entry
- Pull Me, I'm Your Fabulous Weapon (a title contest) by Jadestone Doll.
700 points, ended December 22, 2006, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
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You really must like that english girl LoL
Great piece you have here.
I really enjoyed it a lot.
Good luck in my contest.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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I really like this poem... it was different to what I was expecting from the title - perfectly gripping and with such a wonderful flow to it... I really enjoyed this piece
congratulations on the silver - I can see why this won
Keep writing
Polly
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This is really cute. I like it.
My favorite part was:
"It's a hell of a game
She's a one way ticket
And I'm already damned..."
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck!
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Loved It ...
What a great set of lyrics you've designed with these words! Perfecto! I sure hope that you have a tune in mind as well and are doing something with them! It would be a waste if you weren't! Good luck in the contest too! joy
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Now this piece is even written in Eagles of Death Metal Style! It's fun and flirty!
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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