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Shakespeare's Carpe Diem: Revised.

The time is slipping away
And you know that life is short
Don't fear me or turn away
All women should consort

Do not complain or inch away
Love is such a fragile lie
Bu our love can be made honest
If we both lie tonight

Fair mistress your lips quiver so
And I know that you yearn
It's nothing of which to be ashamed
Even your touch; it makes me burn

The sun has set and the moon is high
The stars are blinding bright
Don't look to them, just close your eyes
I'll guide your movement tonight.

Author notes

This is a millenium revision of William Shakespeare's poem "Carpe Diem" It's about his attempt to persuade a woman to have sex with him, using the Latin phrase for "Life is short".

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  • EmoGothicRainbow
    March 15, 2007

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    loooooove it lol

    very cool, sorry I like never comment but I never have time or really want to check this that often, love ya in many ways babe