years have grayed my hair
slowed walk memory impaired
love's still strong still young
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Written May 23rd, 2003
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Great job! I really enjoyed this one. Great write! Keep up the good work!
God bless you,
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Crosseyed387
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BRAVO!!!!!!!!!
This write is a banquet
of earthly delights
the truth and power of what real
classical love can do!
So tasty is this poem with
real youth and magic!
What a show of talent! what a
masterful meassage of your truth!
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I hope that's true! Cuz I have some of those gray (well, I CALL them white) suckers in my hair already. I dye them constantly, but I'd love that strong young love.
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this is such a sweet poem. I think that you have such a grand way with words. I thank you so much for shareing your poem with all of us
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I think even in age love can be young. An old couple could be sitting on the porch in rocking chairs and still be young to me in some sort of way.
A lovely piece here.
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Age is all a matter of mind~set!!!
Love can keep you young, though time is wearing on the body we can still be young at heart!
~Laura
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