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Another Adventure

Rocky mountain escapede. Winding trails yet to be made.
Adventure calls us on our debt so pack your bags. You ready yet?

Surveying the scene. A spectacle of beauty.
We look toward the summit. Our honor and our duty.
Conquering the challenge. It's ours. We'll tame this peak.
Put it at our mercy. A task not for the weak.

So do be strong and hold my hand. Together we can reach the sky
and stand atop the world victorious, spread our wings and fly.

Soaring like two love birds our tangled feathers mingle
and set upon the grass we land, our bellies start to tingle.
I stare into your eyes and notice you are shaking.
My hands begin to tremble. Is this 'love' were making?

I kiss you softly on your cheek
and hold you in my arms, don't speak.
Just be with me like this forever.
closely to me straying never.

I feel your breath upon my face.
So passionate, your warm embrace.
I touch your lips and gloss them over
with a kiss. Your neck. Your shoulder.

I want you to consume my soul,
my very being. Make me whole.
Our bodies become sweaty.
Pressed so tightly to each other.

I enter you in gentle time.
Pleasuring your soul and mind
for I am yours and you are mine
until we reach the climax at our peak.

And collapse there on the ground, so tired and weak.

Drained from our long journey
we look into each others eyes.
I see a tear is welling there.
I understand. It's no surprise.

Our trip is over now but one thing's true.
Many more adventures will ensue.
We've only just begun to fly my dear.
Tomorrow night we travel light so bring your skinny dippin gear.

Wooo...Whooo...

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  • EternalFyre
    January 26, 2007

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    Interesting, using adventure as a way of writing something so erotic at the same time. Good luck in the contest!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 17, 2007

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    Okay WOW! That was a very unexpected trip..to the top of the Rockies and the climax of something else and then...GREAT humor to end it all!!!
    LOL
    I am still trying to figure out how I went from a day adventure in the mountains to hot and sensual to laughing...
    Got me, but it was worth the trip!!!
    Thank you for the invite...
    to read that is


    • sheltered
      January 17, 2007
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      Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. I thought you might.