There's something there.
There has to be.
I can feel it.
I feel it when I kiss your cheek
And you smile at me.
I feel it when I hold you
Because you say you're cold.
I feel it when you hug me
And you linger slightly longer.
I feel it when you smile at me
And when you laugh.
If there's really nothing there
Then how can I feel it so much?
If you really don't feel anything
Then fine, I'll leave you alone.
I'll give up.
But if there's something there...
If you can feel it too...
Then please, please, just give me a chance.
You're the only one I want.
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Wow I love this poem. And I can relate in so many ways it hurts. The rhymes were great, the flow was great, and the subject is something everyone can relate to. Great job!
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i really like this poem keep up the good work and iam very interested on reading your poems if you wanna to have a look at my poems.
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aww so sweet
This poem is awesome I really like it.I understand this poem very well.you did a wonderful job writing it.~shirree~<3 a.k.a ~ocean dreams
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AHHHH!!!
You are making me smile and it is not cool at all.
Love!Mia
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smiling is good. smiling can never be not cool.
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Otay fine. Smiling is good.
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good good good
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aww ur sweet
Beautiful poem... Be careful if this is a friend... It's never good to fall in love with a good friend... Trust me I know from personal experience... It only ends in heartbreak... Sorry I have no encouraging words for your situation... Again Beautiful poem I can feel what you're feeling...
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