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Incomplete without you

Although years have passed since we've been together,
you're in my mind and heart always.

Life has lead us down different roads, and I will cherish the day in which our paths shall cross again.

You've left your indention on my soul and in my brain,
an impression that will never be erased.

I think of you and where you might be these days.

I remember the last time we were together, you took my hand and led me in a dance atop a hill overlooking the city.  
That night our souls entertwined and danced along with our bodies.

Distance has been put between us physcially, but I know in our hearts we will be together forever.

Destiny and fate are all we have to rely on now.

You with your life and family, and me with mine, leave only a pin hole opportunity for us to reunite anytime soon.

We've got to put trust, hope and love into that time in which our physical entities and our soulful entities will reunite.

Whether it be tomorrow or twenty years from now that we can be together again,

Just know that until then...I'll be waiting for you to make me whole again.

Author notes

Sounds cliche', but... "When you love something, set it free. If it comes back to you it was yours all along" (for contest... "fantasy")

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  • Shadow Seraphim
    April 29, 2007

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    Aww I really Love this one It makes me Cry and think about my own life, in that frame of mind. To me Life is best traveled with someone you love, but sometimes life takes us down many different roads, we always have what's in our Hearts to hold us up, and keep us moving in the hopes of seeing that loved one again somewhere along the way.. well Thank you for entering it. and Good Luck....

    Dream


  • Memoirs of a Girl
    April 8, 2007

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    So beautifully written. Few words are there that can describe how this poem makes me feel. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!


  • Endeavor gold member
    February 1, 2007

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    Excellent

    Amazing words of yearning

    Always
    We all deserve to be loved
    to the depths of our soul
    at lease once, in our lives

    Wonderfull crafting of emotion

    Rick


  • Nicole Cudworth
    December 21, 2006

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    OMG I truly know exactly how you feel. I have recently been back in touch with my old flame who I have felt this way about for fifteen years. Only time can tell and I think you are right when you say if you love something let it go, if it comes back to you, it's yours! I wish you all the luck in your quest to reunite with the one who is your soulmate. There is no greater feeling than the one that clicks when your souls reconnect...

    Love and luck in all you endeavor.


  • WinE-reDpuddles
    December 21, 2006

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    wow!

    i really really enjoyed reading this!...indeed i totally agree with what uv written in your notes!..


  • sisterofthemoon1962
    December 21, 2006

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    Moving Write

    This write really moved my soul.Aweeeeeee the loss and sadness of simply letting go of someone that you love.You've expressed so much emotion that we all feel when we have to say goodbye.
    This is a beautiful,flowing write that captures your heart and makes you remember the love that got away.
    A wonderfulllllllll,wonderful write
    Years ago when I was 16,I had a boyfriend and we loved one another deeply and he bought me a poster with the phrase that you put in your "author's notes",sadly to say he got killed and I had to go on without him and I lived by that motto and I'll always remember that gift he gave me.
    Thank you so,so much for sharing your world and your poetry with us.
    I look forward to reading all of your poetry.
    Merry Christmas and have the happiest of a New Year
    God bless you and yours
    Angela


  • Kari gold member
    December 21, 2006

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    Whenever you meet the love of your life..you know that you will always be together with them...
    The best of luck to you in the contest !

    Kari


  • Summer Dawn
    December 20, 2006
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    this is full of love. something written very nice for someone who would hopefully cherish it if read. one never knows the true outcome of things. most likely it wont happen because fate plays tricks on our hearts. but ya never know. thanks for sharing.


  • bananasfoster42
    December 20, 2006
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    nice write. i really like it. i can feel the emotion.


  • JungleFire09
    December 20, 2006
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    This poem is very sad. It is deep and you express yourself quite well. Great job!


  • blue128eyedkk
    December 20, 2006

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    I totally agree. I was forced to stop seeing my ex boyfriend and he didnt say anything when it happened. I realize it was because he knew that he had no choice but to let go and hope for the best. Now we are talking. It seems very surreal but we'll see what happens. Great write. Loved it! Keep it up! check out some of my writes?

    -karen

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