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Reason

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REASON


Reflective paradigms,
to others appear dreary
              as only useless theory.

Reason tries to change
disordered recipes;
              of day’s uncertainties.

Confused philosophers,
songs of futility,
              sing harmony to me.






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Option 2
In response to the poem- Echoes and Reflection
by DKakaLunaticSerene

Art Cutout : R S Adams Jr

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  • Tirrell
    March 30, 2007

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    This is quite beautiful, I like the melody this has runing through it, it creates the mood of a merry undertone, as time takes center stage in this rhapsody of thought. Very nice indeed!


  • Lyndon gold member
    January 4, 2007
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    You have written a Blakean special.

    Richard, Not many online here can present a fine philosophical poem with a drawing to match. Best wishes. This is a free verse rhyming poem, pared down to the necessities of your theme of the rationality in abstraction. Ron


  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    January 4, 2007

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    OJ from Concentrate!

    lol! You have certainly dialed this in and pared it done to a lean and nourishing penning! Well done poet! Good Luck!
    XXOO
    DK


  • radical24
    December 20, 2006

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    well put together as in content.....format not appealing to me, does nothing for your work.....best, radical


    • R S Adams Jr silver member
      December 20, 2006
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      on Reason.

      Thank you, radical. The format is new to me too...it just came that way. I'm glad you liked the content because that is where I spent a lot of time.

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