REASON
Reflective paradigms,
to others appear dreary
as only useless theory.
Reason tries to change
disordered recipes;
of day’s uncertainties.
Confused philosophers,
songs of futility,
sing harmony to me.
Author notes
Option 2
In response to the poem- Echoes and Reflection
by DKakaLunaticSerene
Art Cutout : R S Adams Jr
A contest entry
- Echoes and Reflections by DK akaLunaticSerene.
700 points, ended January 12, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is quite beautiful, I like the melody this has runing through it, it creates the mood of a merry undertone, as time takes center stage in this rhapsody of thought. Very nice indeed!


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You have written a Blakean special.
Richard, Not many online here can present a fine philosophical poem with a drawing to match. Best wishes. This is a free verse rhyming poem, pared down to the necessities of your theme of the rationality in abstraction.
Ron
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OJ from Concentrate!
lol! You have certainly dialed this in and pared it done to a lean and nourishing penning! Well done poet! Good Luck!
XXOO
DK

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well put together as in content.....format not appealing to me, does nothing for your work.....best, radical
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on Reason.
Thank you, radical. The format is new to me too...it just came that way. I'm glad you liked the content because that is where I spent a lot of time.
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