Vividly flashing images
Memories from your life
From the days overcome with happiness
To the nights you shook with strife
Morbid thoughts racing rapidly
For no particular reason
Your dreary mood flips once again
Like the changing of the seasons
Your tears are overwhelming
You where laughing just yesterday
All of your profound views on life
So quickly thrown away
Even on the happiest of days
You can't erase your wish to die
The entire time you're falsely laughing
I know that soon you'll really cry
My little bipolar angel
Flapping your charcoal wings
I wonder if you'll ever be happy
I know you're destined for better things
Please tell me what you think
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Exellent peice of mind and work. This is so powerful. Yeah... I think this is something worth a million comments. Fucking doctors... Lol. Maintain your talent baby!
chase me
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lol thanx for the awesome comment
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Crazed
seriously well written, but i dont quite understand some of the views. Im more of the happy go lucky type haha. Give me a big fat sack of pot and a big fat sack of corn chips and im set for life lol. Theres plenty in the world to smile about! midgets for example.. or people with funny disabilities... Yeah im going to get slapped one day! but im ok with that.
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I think we are all bi polar...just some are more obvious, and more extreme....for this we can all relate to the poem you've crafted here...
The way you wrote the last lil bit of this, makes me wonder if your "little bipolar angel"
is really your daughter....
If this is true, I can totally see how lil kids are bipolar....
One moment they're crying and they hate you...Next they're crying cause you're not there...lol
Either way....I love this!
You Are, A fantasticly talented writer, whom bleeds her soul onto the page....
I stand in awe before your pen, and spark a smile of happiness...of knowing there are people who can really write....
Peace and Love,
Matt
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Powerful
This is a condition that can be overcome... if you are interested IM me.
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beautiful write. the last stanza stands out above all others, even though the whole thing was good. You have some good skill there, keep up the good work!
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WoW! I love this poem! You did a wonderful job writing it! Keep up the good work!
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I love it and I can definitely relate. I feel this way about some people...and even myslef at times. I love how your language flows so perfectly well and you get the job done. This is very compelling and I love how the reader can feel every inch of emotion and imagery you convey here. A touching piece that's well constructed and quite vivid. Great job!
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this is so true. This is a wonderful explanation of how we feel in our bipolar states of minds. lol (plural) I think I too am bipolar but serously don't want meds again
I love you april! We struggle on for we ar ethe strong ones whether you like it or not!
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