Step gently
into my garden.
Gaze longingly
as my rose glistens,
pleading for your touch,
petals falling open in your presence
Feel my silkiness
against your skin,
as we tumble
though whispers of innuendo
There is a familiar feeling
as you find my secret flower
and release this flow of emotion.
Delve deeper...
into my psyche
learn the language my love speaks
as my soft voice,
and the scent of lavender
Tempt you to sleep.
Stay with me, Lover
as I venture to know
your beautiful mind,
taste your sweet nectar,
and feel the beating
of your softened heart as it sighs,
for, nothing else matters now
but the breathless moon's glow
reflecting in my eyes
as you quench this desire,
the touch of our lips,
and this night.
Author notes
option # 5
I was inspired by this background taken from DK's "beautiful images" selection
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2242681
A contest entry
- Echoes and Reflections by DK akaLunaticSerene.
700 points, ended January 12, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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So warms the heart.
This is a poem you just want to wrap around yourself. It so soothing and full of emotions that cry out for a person to sigh.
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Stunning!
That is so ggratifying to know one of my original works put a viewer in this place, for this is a lucious place to be! Thank you poet! Good Luck!****
xxoo
dk
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well, pat yourself on the back, girlie
cause you have a way of inspiring
Thanks again for the great comment and this one was actually a fun write for me
xoxo
Lynda
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This is so tender and beautiful. The imagery sweet and sensual...just makes me sigh Beautifully penned.
Jersene
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Lynda there can be far more read into this piece that the words convey.A very sexual, sensuous piece. That promises more that the words deliver.Another fine piece As ever a pleasure to read Good luck in the contest
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thank you!
I tried
That is about as sensual as I can get, Legend...It was difficult lol but I wanted to try..
I am too shy
so I only like to imply
hehe I am glad you saw the true meaning...You always do...I like that....
Lynda
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Such a beautifully invitation this one is...a delicatly sensual tumble it is...as love feels it refreahing way through Nature.s sweet field of promise...beautiful poem angel poet...
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Excellent
All well said in precious words
So much is just one silky words after another
I realy love your style
it is easer to read and feel
then to attempt to capture
in my comment
the opening stanza is beautifull
Rick
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Beautifully written, Lynda...beautiful
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Excellent
Lynda this is an amazing poem. The descriptiveness within this poem of love is wonderful. You have a way with words that caresses the readers heart and captivates them Brilliant enty I think in this contest Sis wishing you the best of luck Brian.
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Oh sis this is just lovely. Each write you pen of love leaves me with such a sigh spendin' spree... The words you chose created such softness, as always and you penned in so pretty. Very well written...Trina
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