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Color blind

Swath of colors bloom. Painted flowers.
Florescent moon. Sketch the sunrise
thinly outlined. Shades of dusk
by afternoon. Broken pencil.
Shattered mind. Charcoal sticks
left color blind. And melted crayons
drip and ooze, mingling tones and hues.
Drawing breath which leads to sighs.
I black and white my colored eyes.

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I wanna be your puppy dog...Please!

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  • JoyfulWriter
    February 3, 2007

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    You are so adorable! A very powerful and beautiful piece here, my friend! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck! Smiles, Terry


    • sheltered
      February 12, 2007
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      Wooo Whooo!

      Thanks BlessedAngel. Does this mean I get to be your cuddly puppy dog?