Christmas is a time for giving
a time for living
a time for love
a time for holidaying with family
a time for reflecting on the past
a time for planning the future
What a wondrous world it would be
if all the year was like one big Christmas holiday
Caring, sharing, fun and laughter
Christmas holidays are the time for me
Author notes
Anonymous contest so no names in comments please and Good luck to all. Merry Christmas. You may wish to also read another Christmas poem I wrote >> http://allpoetry.com/poem/3675190
In a list
A contest entry
- The Great Holiday Give Away by StormGoddess.
600 points, ended December 21, 2006, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Christmas from New Perspectives by micol.
800 points, ended December 10, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - All views on Christmas and Holidays in General by SatanicTemptation09.
600 points, ended December 21, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lol. This was really cute. I liked that it was short yet sweet! This was a very good write. The flow and pacing was very good.
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thanks for comment on my entry in your contest..and for HM ...Amazingly I have a poem with same name as you....the link is >> http://allpoetry.com/poem/3676312 and if u read it please tell me what u think and if u want to add it or link to it on your page please do but give me due credit for it please and tell me if u add please.Merry Christmas
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Short and sweet . . . I love the Christmas season myself, and this poem succintly and concisely brings exactly what I love about Christmas into focus. And amazing write.
Stay smiling and keep writing
Polly -
I don't celebrate XMAS but i do enjoy this poem. It's show simple and sweet and really carries that holiday vibe.
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*sparkling*
Well, I think this had a wonderful message in it. I think it lost some rhythm in the middle, but picked back up for me in the end. Who cares I say, it again, was a wonderful message and...my pleasure to read
~Tia
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thanks all for comments
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Good
The facts are clear about Christmas, but the point made midst the poem is the spirit of Christmas should last all year..giving, caring.. -
Very nice
I believe this is the sweetest poem I have read in a long time. You've done an exceptional job on this beautiful piece. May you be merry through out the year. -
Fantastic
I agree...It would be a wondrous world if it was like one big christmas all year long...People think that just the holidays are the time to be kind, loving, and giving. When really it should be this way always...great job!
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Cute lines about ways the season should be enjoyed. Nicely written.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm
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