oh what a feeling
swirling and dipping
swaying and bobbing
twirling and spining
dancing, dancing
twirling on toes
round and round
notes 'pon notes
racing, running
round your head
sweet purfumes
sweet notes
fermenting in your head
drinking, drunk
intoxicated
on sweet notes
notes resounding
hearts and heads
resounding with
sweet notes heard
harmonics ringing
echoing, resounding
drinking, drunk
intoxicated 'pon
sweet notes.
Author notes
In case you don't understand it, every authors nightmare It's about how you can feel drunk off of music. I've been listening to Flyleaf for somereason lately and they can just make me feel so High, I think it's the harmonics. System of a Down and Incubus do it to me as well though
Please tell me what you think
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I really like what you've done with this poem - drunk upon music - you describe this very well. I think the format of this poem also helps to convey this meaning, with short, yet flowing lines and the many verbs. It kinda makes you feel the music just by reading it (if that makes sense!?) I think you've captured the intoxication of music very well and I wnjoyed this read.
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