I used to weep myself to sleep, for the lonely that is the way,
Bitter disappointment always the mood, I ended in every day.
Then I thought of those I fancied, but never met face to face,
And wondered what may result, if taken to my favourite place.
So every night I chose a name, from my special Fantasy List,
Flying to distant worlds as we cuddled, caressed and kissed.
Soon my nights became delights and exquisite in the extreme,
Periods of incredible happiness and great for my self esteem.
A favourite of many trips is a Dragon, who has silky soft ears,
We could create love all night, without pauses, fires, or fears,
We travelled ageless lands where there’s only rampant peace,
As laughter echoes in the balmy air and wonders never cease.
Climbing up rainbows laughing out, like children hand in hand,
Then frolicking among the evening stars, in that timeless land.
We giggled as making daisy chains from flowers every where,
Laughed gaily from the fun of threading them through her hair.
I love to explore her bottomless eyes, as they smile up at me,
Her delicate hands held with gentleness, wherever we may be.
I adore whispering sweet poetry, into a delightful fluffy soft ear,
Things she enjoys hearing whenever, I venture close and near.
For when I take her into my arms, and feel trembles of delight,
I marvel at her sweet voice all through the long indulgent night.
Until we both land at passion’s peak, like mortals can never do,
Then solemnly shivering in ecstasy, as the solar breezes blew.
For We are poets and do such things, while both acting as one,
For there’ nothing better in our world, than love and having fun.
So when the journey was finally over and the sun began to rise,
Coming down to earth at last, bathed in the gold of sunlit skies.
For we are but dream lovers living far apart on our mother earth,
Adult children enjoying all we’ve missed for all that we are worth.
So if ever you see a beautiful Dragon, with appealing velvet ears,
Smile kindly so she wont burn you and approach her without fear.
Author notes
Pure Fantasy ..what else ??
AP Memeber Dragonsear
In a list
A contest entry
- Let Me Be Your Dream Catcher or Snatcher by bloved.
300 points, ended May 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What is your fantasy? by Sinfully Yours.
1000 points, ended July 11, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The wonders of many sleepless nights. by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
600 points, ended July 23, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Honor a friend by Nereida Nightshade.
450 points, ended August 29, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a beautiful poem so magical and diffently a honor to a friend. Well done! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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I used to weep myself to sleep, for the lonely that is the way,
Bitter disappointment always the mood, I ended in every day.
Then I thought of those I fancied, but never met face to face,
and wondered what may result, if taken to my favorite place.
So every night I chose a name, from my special Fantasy List,
Flying to distant worlds as we cuddled, caressed and kissed.
Soon my nights became delights and exquisite in the extreme,
Periods of incredible happiness and great for my self esteem.
A favorite of many trips is a Dragon, who has silky soft ears,
we could create love all night, without pauses, fires, or fears,
We traveled ageless lands where there’s only rampant peace,
As laughter echoes in the balmy air and wonders never cease.
CLimbing up rainbows laughing out, like children hand in hand,
And then frolicking among the evening stars, in that timeless land.
We giggled as making daisy chains from flowers every where,
Laughed gaily from the fun of threading them through her hair.
I love to explore her bottomless eyes, as they smile up at me,
Her delicate hands held with gentleness, wherever we may be.
I adore whispering sweet poetry, into a delightful fluffy soft ear,
Things she enjoys hearing whenever, I venture close and near.
For when I take her into my arms, and feel trembles of delight,
I marvel at her sweet voice all through the long indulgent night.
Until we both land at passion’s peak, like mortals can never do,
Then solemnly shivering in ecstasy, as the solar breezes blew.
For We are poets and do such things, while both acting as one,
For there’ nothing better in our world, than love and having fun.
So when the journey was finally over and the sun began to rise,
Coming down to earth at last, bathed in the gold of sunlit skies.
For we are but dream lovers living far apart on our mother earth,
Adult children enjoying all we’ve missed for all that we are worth.
So if ever you see a beautiful Dragon, with appealing velvet ears,
Smile kindly so she won’t burn you and approach her without fear.
This poem is 367 word which is not what I wanted I pacifically said 200 no more are less you didn’t put the code in the author notes and you had some minor errors that I corrected proof read it are enter another piece that has the requirements please ~ thanks for entering ~ jewels ~ -
this was wonderful and deff true fantasy. but im sure many people will be able to realate to it. this was amazing and well written. this is very awsomly written.
well done and best of luck
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umm...yeah! this is a true fantasy....and fantasies are supposed to be big and unpredictable! and thats exactly what this was....all the other peoms i read in this contest are similar, but this is far out! great job and good luck!
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i liked it! but don't you think that even you fell in love often thare is simply one you love perticulary and you wanna with her.. i mean you can't love the same! but i liked it.
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nice fantasy
this is really nice. i love the style and the flow. love the fantasy. Great job! thanks for entering
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Amazing
This poem was astounding. I could imagine you with this dragon the whole time. From frolicking in the stars to the daisy chains in her hair. Exeptional piece of work. I love your writing.
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This piece is absolutely amazing! It took me to so many places and let me feel so much! Another great work from your pen...I can't seem to get enough! Perfect choice of words with tons of lovely imagery, now I'll be looking over my shoulder for a velvet eared dragon...don't worry, I'm fearless!
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loved it......much love looking glass
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Great to hear from you again.
Aaahh the mysterious looking glass..... thanks again for your wonderful support and I just hope that the New Year brings you the happiness and health that you would like. I am intrigued by your comments and support and value your support very much. Thanks for the applaue as it is wonderful to be appreciated and helps my growing confidence.
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You made my day!
Sweet Bazza, thankyou so much. I thoroughly enjoyed the verse and the journey you took me on. Christmas away from family is difficult but having far away friends writing such lovely poetry eases my lonliness. You have a special place in my heart.
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Glad it made you happy
I am glad I gave a glimmer of pleasure to that kind soft heart of yours and so I will take this opportunity to wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Although it is sad you will be away from your loved ones, I know that you all will benefit from the experience as absence makes the heart grow fonder and therefore increases the strength of those golden threads that bind you together as a family.
I am posting another poem in a few minutes that I hope you enjoy too. 
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WAW! Bazza, that was realy nice and touching. Sigh...
I would be able to read it over and over again. Marvelous verses, story, love... Sigh... I will put this one to my special feature book. This is a real fairy tale for adults to bring them a peace of childhood mistery, imagination, fantasy and miracle world of love.
~Sonja~
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Thanks for the compliment.
Hello Sonja, thanks for the lovely words and applause and I am so gad that you received something from it too. I am posting another in a few minutes that is the first I have seen on the subject yet seems to be completely neglected. I often wonder why dogs run off after they have had their fill, without looking back, and this is not far off the same thing. Pity, but the world is full of selfishness and self gratification .... just part of the greed that rules this world. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and your loved ones. * love)
Actually this new poem reflects exactly what you commented on .... which I saw after writing the poem, not before.
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hi my lovely daddy
wow...a fantasy? I love it. But tell me where can I find such a dragon?
Love you
Wish you wonderful happy days.
Shahrzad
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Love you too .... take care my sweet for often at Christmas there are bad things ... satan is around ... Thanks for the lovely words and applause ... and it must be time I wrote another for you but I have been critisciszed lately for being too sweet ..... I wonder what it is like to have a heart made of stone !! OH well that's something you will never have ...
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