All I AM
is that one moment
ALL I SEEK FOR
is that one moment
where everything is well
and smiles sink me down.
I question myself:
Why are all your fond thoughts
of mad nights and being,
lost
lost
lost.
All I AM
is that one moment
ALL I LONG FOR
Is for it to explode,
into one hundred
flaming
little
shards.
Please tell me what you think
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ALL I SEEK FOR
is that one moment
where everything is well
and smiles sink me down.
If things did not suck the things that do not would not be nearly as precious. I must have missed this one. I could have written this when I was shit canned in 1995/6 and slept under the pines because I was too drunk to hitchhike all the way home and by far too lazy to walk.
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youre a good man
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I all I want is to be tattooed by the shards from that one moment that IS me so no one ever asks again...
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Goodolenad wants to beast your bones
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Sparsely cohesive, drills the mainline
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this is really amazing i can completely realate to it at this point in my life too, as i think we all can.
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darling poet, you've got quite a way with words. that ending is marvelous. what a way to describe what none of us can ever begin to describe.....one hundred flaming shards of glass.
we're all looking for that moment.
wonderful wonderful wonderful write. you're quite the poet.
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