Money and sex,
has worn out it's welcome.
She was just pushed to the test.
No longer does she wish for diamonds, cars, and a mansion.
Now that she has everything that she dreamed of,
her heart has a void,
left yet unfilled and truly unsatisfied.
She wishes that she could fill it,
so she sips some more of her vodka,
yet still is can't find it.
"What am I missing? What is it that my heart is wishing?"
What it's looking for is love.
A void that cannot be filled with false accusations,
can't be filled with a bottle of Jack.
She clings to a picture of the one she once loved,
lost him over greed and deciete.
This was the life,
living high on a string.
She's tired of the drugs and the boozes,
no-body loves her, she's got nothing to loose.
She sips a bit more....
and then closes the door,
she screams out for help, but no one can hear.
The shot from a metal,
right through her chest,
there she filled the gap, with a silver bullet...
Author notes
I just let go on this one....nothing really spectacular.
A contest entry
- Ray Caesar - digital art inspiration #3 by leander.
400 points, ended January 5, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me everything you feel when you read this.........
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you have written a very dark and sad poem out of this picture 
I actually never saw that inside of it, but that's what makes these kind of contests fun.
You've done a good job with this, and took me by surprise with the subject matter - well done! -
you should win. you had me guessing wut happened from beginning to end. great job. i have a poem that i should put out soon that will have you guessing and awww and wanting to read the next part. it's called STORY OF A HOPELESS GIRL. it's great. i even amazed myself when i wrote it. look out for it and tell me what you think. and look at my page for more titles. choose the ones you really wanna read and i will put it up. great write. keep it coming. return the favor.
~Dani~
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Wow, this is very sad but very well written and put together.
Btw, how have you been doing? I miss talking to you. We definitely need to hang together one day.
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Brooke I think it has a great moral ,but you have so much to love and be thankful for. You see, I know what its like when life has problems that worsen your situations, but its not right to give pain rights to you. If life was as easy as we wanted it to be, then we wouldn't have a purpose. See Brooke, if we didn't have the bad times then we wouldn't appreciate the good times we have. Life may be hard but you have to push on or it will consume you.
*If life gives you lemons, make lemonade*
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Silly Goose '.'
Love, this wasn't ment for my life!!!! lol this was ment for the picture in the contest!!!! DUH!!!! Thanks anyways.....
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