now living in loneliness
even within a crowd
maybe if you close your eyes
for a moment you will be fine
and for now you will detach yourself
from the world
searching for the non-existent cure
for a hallow soul and a troubled mind
you just keep moving so you don't realize
you are internally dead
and hooked up to "semi-silent" machines
that monitors practically nothing
but creates permanent scars in your arms
that makes you feel even emptier when you look at them
and maybe if you close your eyes
for a moment you will be fine
but once you realize that there will be no tomorrow
you quietly lay your life down
and eternally seal those eyelashes tight
creating your peaceful and tragic ending
and to a now re-united existence
Author notes
simply put this is a poem about feeling lost without someone or just feeling lost in general...i would rather you feel something out of it then for me to tell you exactly what i wrote it about. you can think someone is emotionally dying, phisically or both...it is your interpritation.... and i would like it to remain that way.
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this is rle amazing the way you put it its well written and yes very true even in those few lines you can picture exactly what is going on...keep writing i want ot read more form you
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the semi-silent machines part?...if so that was my fav part to write..most personal
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