Perhaps you feel threatened
perhaps you were bored
perhaps you were shaking
perhaps you just snored
but life's not the same
since you went away
my empty email box
each day after day
didn't ask you to love me
or bear kids for me
just wanted some friendship
but then, you know me
I saw what was missing
and can't help at all
the sneaking and jumping
of your defense wall
I really want nothing
I'm not here to steal
you give me the time and
I'll love and you'll heal
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the last stanza is beeauutiful! and hey, this piece is everything but absolute crap! and yeah, now i know what u mean by being serious,, AND funny.. luv and cheers, shuvi
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this is pretty
good for being absolute crap!
I rather liked it!
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This is sweet - why its in a list called absolute crap I will never know.
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GRAND!
I loved this. That's the way it all should be. Your
last stanza touched my heart, I won't soon forget it.
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Glad you liked it.
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Awed!
Damn .. I just had this conversation with someone ...
and this was pretty much what was said:
"I saw what was missing
and can't help at all
the sneaking and jumping
of your defense wall
I really want nothing
I'm not here to steal
you give me the time and
I'll love and you'll heal"
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what an awesome piece here ..love it!!!!
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Silence is a perfect Muse
Absence may instigate thoughts of deep compassion and evaluation. Your poem is an example of that wondrous Muse called Silence. Within silence answers are given on questions one did not know exist. Absence may guide the soul to expand. Thank you for that very lovely last line:
I'll love and you'll heal. That is an accurate description of the healing process.
Love
Always Myra
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awww this was so good, i got in trouble at work and got sidetracked lol
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Impressive
A wise man once said to me,
"what do you think of my new motto" ?? LOL,
na im kiddin,
This is fantastic and OOOO so true!
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Who is this wise guy and what is his motto?
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LOL
Ooooo i cant reveal that info here,
but wow, he's a very classy man, and sex appeal? WoooHoooo, this guy Al,
HAS IT ALL! -
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I think I HATE him!!!
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LMAO
You'd love him,
everyone does!
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Two thumbs up!
Holy cow
Opppsss...I am breathless!!! I honestly did not know where to begin.
I found the poem to be very moving... Beautifully written,it says so much in so many ways. It's deep, touching, and perfect (*_~)
I absolutely loved your poem. It was really from the soul.
To be honest
This put into words how I feel about special someone that is half way around the world. While we are able to write often, it is in our dreams that we are able to hold and feel one another.
It gave me goose bumps and I got that little tingling sensation, you know, the one when someone runs their finger down your spine really fast and you get those tingles? those....hahahaha
GRACE
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Well, golly! Nice to have you to build my ego, seeing as some are too shy to comment. (and you know who you are) After all, my ego needs building. Thanks for the comment.
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