The Word
I have unquestionably been given
spills painfully from my mouth
like teeth after a street brawl
I do not want that word
like the child eating macaroni and cheese
while the adults eat lobster
and drink champagne
I do not want to sit at this table
and be circumstance's bitch!
doing as I am told
with the other children
but, I chose freedom
and must complete my training
and this lesson in obedience
was asked for
so, I straighten my spine
and smile genuinely
and adore my tablemates
I take a deep, deep breath
expanding beyond myself
losing everything that
prevents me from
speaking enthusiastically
the word
I have been given
Platonic
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When you reach for the brass ring, don't be surprised if you pull a muscle!!!!
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Awesome piece...you always bring it. I expect nothing less from you.
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Interesting AN
But I love the poem! Well done - it captivated my attention all the way, especially with the long spacing between the stanzas. I take it you're not a fan of platonic love, judging by the BG and the tone of the poem. But well expressed; a truly fantastic piece!
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On the contrary. I think Platonic love, as defined by Plato not the silly misrepresentation adopted in the middle ages, is the highest form of love there is. As such, it is not at all easy to attain. It requires a level of selflessness that includes such self-discipline that few can muster it.
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Very Interesting take...
I fell for the line..."But I chose freedom" We are
accountable for and to our choices. Very stirring write.
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sad and heart wrenching , but I do not even have this... anyhow well done love
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great
love the remark on the bottom !
great work but did you have to say that word/ what does it mean no no no.... i dont have that word in my vocal range,i tried to say it but it just wont come out i just love the word *friend* but please do no tmake me add the *other* word ha ha ha keep up the good work my.....friend....
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great
You have nothing to fear... that word has no bearing on you.. was given for a special situation. I have another word for you...
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UH..UH..UH .This poem is very touching ... you have expressed the feelings so precisely.Its says everything in a very direct and poetic way...(SMILE)
XOXOXO,
GRACE
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Oooo
Al im sorry hun but this is kinda sad,
whats the point if you cant taste the lobster too???
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Well, In a platonic relationship the only thing you cannot do is possess, or try to possess. In some cases that means more than others. My interpretation is that I am not allowed to ask for anything for myself, explicitly or implicitly.
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