Deep withen Us there is a Calling,
It is what We are and who We are, all at once.
The mysterys of Ourselves are staring to spirl forth.
It makes Us whole , yet life becomes more complex.
We gaze into the the skys and ask the Anciant Great ones for Guidiance and courage.
The Earth moves into the seasons, while the Moon chases itself though the cycles of life.
What will become Us all we still have that mystery to solve.
Now the cylces of the Moon continue and seasons shift...Still WE gaze upon the skys into the Anciants eyes.
Please tell me what you think
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Wow beautiful write and it is so full of wisdom. I love all of it but especially the part about the calling deep within us. Inspirational write!
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Me likes!
Very zen, and yet it retains your usual avalonian style. This is very well written, Fire!
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Not bad... My biggest problem is that I always have to highlight because I can't read the text against the backround.
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Hey, I really like this poem. It's very mystic and the 'Us" and "We" really drew me in. Great job (=^_^=)
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wow what a beautiful poem i think and so true i like everything about this piece...keep up the good work.
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WOW
you made me feel like I was staring into the empty night sky seeking for guidance.I love to read poems that put me there.Great imagery and a nice flow.Love the word choice as it brings the piece to life..
I just loved it.
God Bless
and have a
Merry Christmas
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