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Grace

A light beyond the curtain yield

A fading voice shall sing

It rises o'er the sunset's shield

And 'round the mountain ring

 

Grace shall he bring

Grace shall he sing

Grace shall be spoke with the rhymes of the king

 

We must relive the moments for 

We both might go the morrow

So take a hold of me, my lord

Forget the daytime sorrow

 

Grace shall we bring

Grace shall we sing

Grace shall be wrote by the times enchanting

 

The followed light embraces soon

By waters still and rocked 

And setting sail for midnight moon 

The Rose and metal Mohawk

 

"Grace will she bring

Grace will she sing

Grace will be smote in the crimes of her wing


She rises o'er the sunset's shield

And 'round the mountain ring

She brings her love into my field

My love, my everything"

Author notes

Written on 19th December 2006 at 01:16 GMT

An aubade

The reference 'Rose and metal Mohawk' is me and my boyfriend. My middle name is Rose and he has a mohawk haircut.

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  • Kain
    January 16, 2007
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    Beautiful, yes, very beautiful. This could be your next song. With the way it was written, you could turn it into a traditional piece.. an Irish traditional piece. I command that you do this!

    Yours in hopeful song,
    Kain


  • pattyann4500
    December 19, 2006

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    How lovely this is, Laura. Your lyrics are always beautifully written, and I so enjoy them. Hugs, Mom


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 19, 2006
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    How nicely done...it has a seranade ring to it........