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Just one day from your secret admirer

I walk by unnoticed by you watching you from afar
I stare at you longingly It's all I can do
Wishing you feel how I do
I call your house just to hear you voice then hang up
Burning with desire inside I remember your every move by heart
What I wouldn't do to be with you
In my heart I know were meant to be
I gave up my life to forever follow you
In my dreams you me together forever
Tis every girls fantasy for you to hold them in your arms
Whatever it takes for you and me for just a day
We'd be perfect if only it weren't for those other girls
If only you too burned with desire as I do
If only you would notice me as I notice you
If only we could be together just us and nobody else
Nothing will ever make me forget how much I love you
How I wish we could have just one day and you would see it too
Your the perfect one for me it has to be you and it has to be me
No one else can compare to you you're the best there ever is
Your more perfect than perfection More amazing than possible
In  just a few minutes you swept me off my feet
You may have never even looked at me again if only for one day we were alone
Just one day for you and me and we'd be perfect together forever
They mean nothing to you you just don't see me standing in the crowd
I know exactly who you are if only I had one day I could prove I'm the one for you
I wait upon your doorstep each morning in the cold
Just to glimpse your your gorgeous face to perfect to describe with words
I stay hidden from your prying body guards
Soon they will be gone and it will be you and me forever






Author notes

This is sort of options 1,4,and 5 mixed in one. This is about a crazy lady who loves this guy so much but so do millions of other girls. She thinks if for one day she could be alone with this guy with no other girls around they could be the perfect couple and he would agree to run off with her to a place where they could be together.
Of course it doesn't work out because he has too many body guards and fans that he only noticed her once for a few minutes. In that few minutes she fell in love with him. Love deeper than the ever possible. Basically stalker love. To me it's a very creepy poem.

option 15

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 16, 2008

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    beautifullywrote here and yes, I definately can see this as I have secretly pined for someone before.


  • The Cube
    May 13, 2007

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    Great work. Could be broken into stanzas for easier read though. Other than that it was an excellent piece.


  • Never
    December 20, 2006
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    I'm putting you in the finalist bracket I need to take another look at this one.


  • gigbob18
    December 18, 2006
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    Crazy