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From sweet lips
comes a gentle kiss
to pull me fast
into abyss,

while your soft hand
creates a gentle sensation
sending me soaring
through my imagination,

I've lost myself
in your strong arms
as you're holding me close
I'm mesmerized by your charms,

You've found the key
and opened the door
tonight I've fallen faster
than ever before.

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  • DenyMyLove
    February 7, 2007
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    AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! This is so incredibly sweet and loving!!!! I can't really help with a title, but two things do come to mind while reading it. 'The One' and 'My True Love'. Awesome write and good luck with a title!!!!
    ~DAWN~


  • Shadows of wolves
    February 7, 2007

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    I have to say that i liked the tempo of this pome it was really a nice wholesome expression of love and falling in love.

    Much enjoyed

    shadows


  • TJCasser
    January 7, 2007

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    I'd admit that I'm not usually too big on rhymed verse. This is, despite that, a very sweet, touching piece - I would hope that you've shared this with the one that inspired the verse. Very lovely.