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So You Know

I hate you.
You've never done anything for me.
You've never been there for me.

At one time i actually looked up to you.
Even when you were never there.
So I want you to know.
I hate you.

I hate you for never knowing.
I hate you for never understanding.
For never listening to the words i say.

I thought you cared.
You even got my name tattooed on you.
Im part of you forever.
So STOP trying to make me someone im not!

But just so you know.
I love you.

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This poem is about my dad.

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  • nobodys-girl
    May 29, 2007

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    my dad was never around when i was younger...and when he was it was horrible. he's around a lot more now...and it's still horrible. i understand the whole hate relationship oh to well...
    thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • warpedsenseoflife
    December 21, 2006

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    i know how you feel here ...it's almost like "I hate you but I can't help loving you" this is well written and I enjoyed it thoroughly