I hate you.
You've never done anything for me.
You've never been there for me.
At one time i actually looked up to you.
Even when you were never there.
So I want you to know.
I hate you.
I hate you for never knowing.
I hate you for never understanding.
For never listening to the words i say.
I thought you cared.
You even got my name tattooed on you.
Im part of you forever.
So STOP trying to make me someone im not!
But just so you know.
I love you.
Author notes
This poem is about my dad.
A contest entry
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1700 points, ended July 5, 2007, 44 entries
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Comments
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my dad was never around when i was younger...and when he was it was horrible. he's around a lot more now...and it's still horrible. i understand the whole hate relationship oh to well...
thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck! -
i know how you feel here ...it's almost like "I hate you but I can't help loving you" this is well written and I enjoyed it thoroughly


