I took the drug
in hope for a change
I took a chance
and loved you the same
They were left turns
made on a "right-turn-only" street
I made a big mistake
and now my heart mourns.
A contest entry
- xX - I never said I wanted to take this - Xx by LaurenLightning--x.
450 points, ended December 31, 2006, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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pretty
this has a really nice ring to it! i like it!
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Nice job! I can't wait to see more of your writing. I like the way you've penned this, it seems so real.
-Allura -
Great write. Drugs are such a mistake. Something so temporary can end up being a permanent mistake. You penned some great lines. Well done.
Jeannie
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I liked it. Short and sweet as another said. Cant wait to read more of your work
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this was a good write...short but sweet...i can relate to this..drugs are a great way to escape reality and run away from yoursel...your a great writter keep reading ill be reading more of your poetry soon!
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cool
I liked the reference to your left turns. Made a few in my time too. Yeah, think a lot of people can relate to your words.
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They were left turns
made on a "right-turn-only" street
I love those lines!!
This is a awesome poem.
Short but sweet.
Thanks for entering and Good Luck!!
Bleeding Glitter xX -
very well written
this a good poem
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