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My head-scarf is apart of me
It is my soul painted
It is my soul adrift
It is myself fluttering by
When all my walls are up
It is my flag of independence
When all else seems ruled
It is my cheer, it is my speech
When my words fail to express
It is my inner beloved hippie
It is my inner beloved goddess
I’ll wrap it around my head
Lace it down my neck and front
Only to flaunt the inner reconcile
Of my inner, my outer, my being and life


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Just came out - means a lot to me. Not my best but i like it all the same . I feel it has character.

Thanks for the read.

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  • Confusicus
    December 18, 2006

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    Hey Zowee,
    This was great, I love the self love expressed in this piece, I love the emotion and the spirit that echoes through the poem as well. Great job me amigo!

    Kare


  • Black Mamba
    December 18, 2006

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    Wow, I agree with everything Mon said. This is a beautiful write straight from the heart!! It suits you down to a Z Very enjoyable read! thanks Zo.

    Welldone, many grand clappings for you


  • Black Panic
    December 18, 2006
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    Yes indeed, character is true. This is a very personal write, and I liked it a lot. Glad to have read it. I thought the use of "it" gave it a great repetition effect. Well, my friend, great effort!
    -Mon