i look at her and wonder
what she has
that i dont
and i dont know
did i do something to hurt you?
or did you just grow away?
you moved on but
im still caught up
in the game of love for one
will you come and join me
or
will i play alone and never win?
Author notes
for oboebaybee and a mixture of my thought as well... hope you like...
Please tell me what you think
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Good poem
It really gets the thought across! I can remember asking basicly that same question numerous times.
I normally get the answer, "I DON"T WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT"< No shit.
"BOO"
Thanks for the comments and reviews on previous poetry!
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Nice
Sounds like you have a bit of a battle on your hands. Nice imgery of the truma that you are enduring. My favourite line is 'will I play alone and never win' this shows that you see love as a game which is intriguing. well written -
Nice
This is a very well penned little poem for my AP Daughter known as Sweets. Ireally like dhow you wrote this and its quite in your own little way. thanks for writing that for her and take care
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you have a really great talent! This peom was short and amazing I know exactly how you feel! Good Job!
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Sometimes....playing alone is the only way to win
Keep that in mind as you set out to heal your heart
Great write....made me think
I missed you!!!
Much Love!
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wow... this has alot of emotion for being short. I wish I had your talent. I enjoyed reading this.
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why r u so sad
sometimes people need to find eachother again.never give up on what u want
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I'm totally in touch with this! It's interesting how many of us seem to go through this, but amazing that so few can do so well putting it into words as you've done.
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I Love this poem! I`m feeling this right now! Great write hun!
Olivia!
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Forgot to applaud!
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I do like!!!!!!! It is totally everything I think lately!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!! Thanks sooooooo much for writing this!!!!!!! It is simple yet strong and emotionally true!!!!!!! Rock On!!!!!!! xoxo Meg
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