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azure and lace





cirrus spirals frozen
fragile lace in azure heaven
-the poetess takes note

 

 

 

 

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for a poetess who stops to smell the rosies and the posies...

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A contest entry

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  • workingharleylady
    January 13, 2008
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    Perfect

    Wonderful use of imagery. Your talent inspires me.


  • NoWayJo
    December 19, 2006

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    This is such a pretty haiku and you've really drawn a lovely image and color of sky to include the essence of azure and the essence of Azure85/Susie, too! Thank you so much for this lovely haiku entry to her contest!

    Jo

    P.S.: Whenever you get a chance, can you tell me what color-combination this background is? I had a similar color posted as background to one of my poems which slipped away during recent upgrades. Fiddling with that color-wheel thing at AP just isn't it bringing back to the same!


  • NurseChilly gold member
    December 18, 2006

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    Ahh Gary.. this is so precious..

    I loved this... truly.. such finesse and refined words

    go for gold my friend
    it's a foggy day here... lololol

    (hope Jane is doing well too)


  • azure85 gold member
    December 17, 2006
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    Oh, this is so lovely! What a beautiful haiku-I love every word in it. A beautiful use of clouds and colors! You are so kind, thank you so much. Nice thoughts to drift off to sleep on.....



    Susie