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Whisper

A whisper
one quiet syllable spoken
as it is carried across the breeze into my ear
sending chills down my spine
the words dance across my mind
feeding the longing I have displayed openly
another and yet another flow through
making my body shake
craving to be held
wanting to be loved
each letter is making me crazy
I fall on my knees crying
hoping one day I can be someones
and yet I must wait
as the words speak softly and tenderly
my time will come
I must sit silently, paitently waiting
for the day of happiness to arrive

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  • Phannie
    December 18, 2006

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    Beatiful!!!!!!!!

    OMG!!So deep this poem..Hopes,& put down how it is..Poems like this really inspire me..I got love for this poem..You are a good writer.


  • SereneFelicity
    December 17, 2006
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    very good
    very beautiful, raw and real yet it flows with want and desire
    its great =)