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Secrets To Success

First this topic need to be defined
Because everyone’s thoughts do vary
Success is when you feel alive
When your life’s not dull or dreary

The poorest man with happy thoughts
Is richer than a millionaire without
Whats the point in hoarding gold
When you’re a kettle without a spout

Building saddened steamy pressure
No outlet to make you grin
For riches are not what shines without
But what gleams from you within

Author notes

I look at so many of my friends driven by the dollar.. I dont feel the same drive, wondered if anybody else out there could tell me why haha.
Am i just lazy?

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  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    January 4, 2007
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    This is quite a clever ditty, and I enjoyed the penning and the message. I didn't see any indication in author's comments of the poem selected for inspiration or the option chosen. Good luck!
    xxoo
    dk