First this topic need to be defined
Because everyone’s thoughts do vary
Success is when you feel alive
When your life’s not dull or dreary
The poorest man with happy thoughts
Is richer than a millionaire without
Whats the point in hoarding gold
When you’re a kettle without a spout
Building saddened steamy pressure
No outlet to make you grin
For riches are not what shines without
But what gleams from you within
Author notes
I look at so many of my friends driven by the dollar.. I dont feel the same drive, wondered if anybody else out there could tell me why haha.
Am i just lazy?
A contest entry
- Echoes and Reflections by DK akaLunaticSerene.
700 points, ended January 12, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is quite a clever ditty, and I enjoyed the penning and the message. I didn't see any indication in author's comments of the poem selected for inspiration or the option chosen. Good luck!
xxoo
dk


